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Array ( [sid] => 111985 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => True Love Broken [time] => 2005-12-22 23:11:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I loved him more than anyone I knew
no one could ever take his place I
believed he was not a human being
but a angel sent from god,

Everyone told me i shouldn't be so bound
to someone i new hardly nothing about but
from that moment i seen him and looked into
his eyes i knew he had to be the one he had
to be that guy,

No matter what anyone said I loved him a endless
amount now he lyes dead in the ground i put a rose
near were he lays and I kiss his tomb stone everyday,

Why did it have to happen why did he have to go away
I never knew how fragile life is till the one i loved
got took away ,

Maybe god hates me I cried for many nights I starved myself
and refused to come out i stayed bottled up and
hurting nothing could take the pain away just a bottle of
Whiskey to drink my life away,

I had no choice I would do anything to rid the pain
and get back in to his
arms and make it all back the same as it was before my life
was ruined before god ripped my heart apart before the tides
came up and tears begin to fall before the red rose welted
and crumbled to pieces and ruined it all. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 487 [topic] => 32 [informant] => darkened_shadow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

True Love Broken

Contributed by darkened_shadow on Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 11:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I loved him more than anyone I knew
no one could ever take his place I
believed he was not a human being
but a angel sent from god,

Everyone told me i shouldn't be so bound
to someone i new hardly nothing about but
from that moment i seen him and looked into
his eyes i knew he had to be the one he had
to be that guy,

No matter what anyone said I loved him a endless
amount now he lyes dead in the ground i put a rose
near were he lays and I kiss his tomb stone everyday,

Why did it have to happen why did he have to go away
I never knew how fragile life is till the one i loved
got took away ,

Maybe god hates me I cried for many nights I starved myself
and refused to come out i stayed bottled up and
hurting nothing could take the pain away just a bottle of
Whiskey to drink my life away,

I had no choice I would do anything to rid the pain
and get back in to his
arms and make it all back the same as it was before my life
was ruined before god ripped my heart apart before the tides
came up and tears begin to fall before the red rose welted
and crumbled to pieces and ruined it all.

Copyright © darkened_shadow ... [ 2005-12-22 23:11:03]
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Re: True Love Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 12:30:28 AM AEST
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I had no choice I would do anything to rid the pain
and get back in to his
arms and make it all back the same as it was before my life
was ruined--- i can relate with the feelings here.... losing the one you love can be heartwrenching. nice write A+++

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