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Crystal Clear
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Am I not empty enough
Could my heart not be filled with rose petals
Like carpet for royalty
Where you could walk to me...
I would bow before your love
Offering my all,my soul to you
Am I not cold enough
Could these fields of wildflowers not dance in your sunlight
Blanketed by your warmth
Where your breath like a summers breeze
Kisses tall grass and colours my dreams
Of you,your nearness
Am I not withered enough
Could my thirst not be quenched by your sweet wine
Like a river of blood
New life coursing my veins...
I would live for your love
Nurture you,while nurtured
Am I not clear enough
Could your eyes not be opened by my faith
Like visions in a crystal ball
Unreal and yet mesmerizing
You are clouded by my tears
For you,I will keep dreaming,hoping
Am I not enough??
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2003-01-25 09:30:00]
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Re: Crystal Clear
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 09:50:00 AM AEST
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| You make the emotions " crystal clear " in this masterpeice of agony. Each time I read it my heart cries. (((((hugs))))) Larry |
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Re: Crystal Clear
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 01:58:29 AM AEST
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Wow this was just amazing so beautiful yet so sad if this is written to ne one hopefully they will open up their eyes. I loved all of this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Crystal Clear
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:13:25 PM AEST
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| What an absolutely beautiful poem. |
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Re: Crystal Clear
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by Love_impossible on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 01:09:36 PM AEST
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| While I read this great poem, hundreds of images went through my mind, but the images were of after one would be filled with love and tenderness. |
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