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Array ( [sid] => 111911 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fool [time] => 2005-12-21 18:24:17 [hometext] => I didnt know what else to write about so I wrote about this.This is short. [bodytext] => You maded me feel like such a fool when I was sitting on the barstool.
I went to the carpool and then I Found out I was a fool for that also.
You think you're so cool but you make your own self look like a fool.
You are so cruel to me When you say those awful words to me.
You used to make me drool over you because I was your fool.

I know I was a fool ,but you're the biggest fool of all for letting others mislead you.

I wont let you rule me anymore cause I am not your fool anymore.

I didnt let it bother me anymore, I went to a whirlpool spa.

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Fool

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 06:24:17 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You maded me feel like such a fool when I was sitting on the barstool.
I went to the carpool and then I Found out I was a fool for that also.
You think you're so cool but you make your own self look like a fool.
You are so cruel to me When you say those awful words to me.
You used to make me drool over you because I was your fool.

I know I was a fool ,but you're the biggest fool of all for letting others mislead you.

I wont let you rule me anymore cause I am not your fool anymore.

I didnt let it bother me anymore, I went to a whirlpool spa.

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2005-12-21 18:24:17]
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Re: Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 07:58:28 PM AEST
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i dont think anyone likes this poem!

Re: Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 01:21:55 PM AEST
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make a bet ?, lol i gotta say and speaking 4 my self, if nothing else u deffiantely have a
most provacitive and unique stye, u write a poem that is real poetry without distortion,
it has what i call, a most belligerant innocence, u write poetry and express with raw emotion, no fancy dancy here, and nothing 2 do with talent or skill, just pure in your face poetry, u know what some one does like it, keep it up i've been reading your work all a long, can't help but notice it, i like it.

Ben

Re: Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 02:36:29 AM AEST
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Well, there's at least two of us that like it! I think I know where you're coming from with this write. I can definitely relate. I love it...and mean that as for as the emotion. I don't love the fact that someone can hurt you like that. But what better way to get it out and write....oh and go to the whrilpool spa. :-)

Don't be anyone's fool. You are a sweetheart.

Take care and thank you for sharing your emotions.

Tim
:-)

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