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jumping from belief to belief right from the get go

religion losing aspect as a pope in prada shoes

with all the starving people its good he doesnt get the blues

hate and blame all in belief not that words can kill

but a frenzied mob with thoughts of god throng for the thrill

war and greed brought from need to battle over land

now we see a killing spree rivers the blood of man

stars the shine past out of time the beauty it lives on

it will last like dust and glass well long after im gone

but in my end i will defend all the rights i have

speak my voice and write my choice this i can be glad

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high fashioned god

Contributed by lostrelic on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 04:50:08 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

understanding faith like understanding life do we really know

jumping from belief to belief right from the get go

religion losing aspect as a pope in prada shoes

with all the starving people its good he doesnt get the blues

hate and blame all in belief not that words can kill

but a frenzied mob with thoughts of god throng for the thrill

war and greed brought from need to battle over land

now we see a killing spree rivers the blood of man

stars the shine past out of time the beauty it lives on

it will last like dust and glass well long after im gone

but in my end i will defend all the rights i have

speak my voice and write my choice this i can be glad

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2005-12-21 16:50:08]
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Re: high fashioned god (User Rating: 1 )
by TREBOR on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 05:11:09 PM AEST
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Good poem and challenging =to 'believers' of all types . Like the strong imagery and am impessed with 'throng for the thrill' Not sure what prada is(don't know the word) but pope in prada shoes also stands out

Re: high fashioned god (User Rating: 1 )
by Marko on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 05:58:43 PM AEST
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Very good religon is such a strong subject and you have just put free speach is a right. You have a talent make sure you use it now i've put everything into prospectus

Re: high fashioned god (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 07:12:05 PM AEST
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Well done! I like the tone and the images used.

Andrew

Re: high fashioned god (User Rating: 1 )
by Sassybat on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 09:28:13 PM AEST
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I don't believe 'God' cares in the least about fashion, old or new. The pope may and preachers and televangelists may wear Prada and Armani and Valencia but I can assure you 'God' has more important issues to deal with, such as this world he gave us and what we are doing to it and the free will we abuse each and every day. This is one strange piece of work.

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