Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 20:31:19 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 111880 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thoughts and dreams [time] => 2005-12-21 03:39:21 [hometext] => Just useless writting of my thoughts [bodytext] => Everything is distorted in the rain...
I wish it would last forever
drenching me in it`s beauty

with the language of the sky
found in the soft music of the foreign breeze
it`s harsh and bitter discord
just right for me

Looking through eyes
of stained glass windows
letting in just enough light
yearning to release such dreams

to a world outside I do not know
trapped in my cathedral
with a shattered stained glass soul

releasing heaven to fall
satisfying curiosity
so I may wake from dreamless sleep
as nothing can exist on it`s own
and forever can come together
with death and a dream
to help me catch a raindrop
for it is so elusive to hold [comments] => 3 [counter] => 524 [topic] => 43 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => ....edited for spelling as requested...by mod_6....25-01-06 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Thoughts and dreams

Contributed by socialmisfit on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 03:39:21 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Everything is distorted in the rain...
I wish it would last forever
drenching me in it`s beauty

with the language of the sky
found in the soft music of the foreign breeze
it`s harsh and bitter discord
just right for me

Looking through eyes
of stained glass windows
letting in just enough light
yearning to release such dreams

to a world outside I do not know
trapped in my cathedral
with a shattered stained glass soul

releasing heaven to fall
satisfying curiosity
so I may wake from dreamless sleep
as nothing can exist on it`s own
and forever can come together
with death and a dream
to help me catch a raindrop
for it is so elusive to hold

Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2005-12-21 03:39:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Thoughts and dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 06:31:39 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Interesting write, well done with the randomness, I enjoyed the poem thanks.

The Phantom

Re: Thoughts and dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 06:20:07 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Very nice write. I love the part when you wrote
"to a world outside i do not know
trapt in my cathedral
with a shattered stained glass soul" it made my stomach drop for a moment. Great job keep it up.
-Jen

Re: Thoughts and dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 08:34:13 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Yes, rain can blur, fog can blind. Do not let your heart be deceived, ensnared by distorted images. Beautiful right, I thank you. Raquel Leah

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com