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Array ( [sid] => 111872 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => just remember what we had... [time] => 2005-12-21 01:56:49 [hometext] => kinda long... [bodytext] => Nothing is left…
Echoing only in my head…
These words of forgiveness

They repeat over and over…
I’m sorry
So sorry…

But only I can hear them…

They resound through the night
Screaming through the darkness
Keeping me awake,
Keeping me alive…

This hope
The longing
Driving me onward
Towards our end…

Losing grip of you
Watching you fade
Obscuring this dream we shared…

This want to have and hold
Yet only being pushed away…

Remembering your skin
The tingling between us…
The way you enlightened me…

You showed me the way
Showed me who to be…

Pressing through the dark…
Into you…
Slipping on your ice slick love
Trying to get my footing…
The neck of a goddess
Calling to me
Begging for my touch
The way I beg to her…
Kissing silken skin
The salty taste of sweetness
My perfect salvation
Saving the best for last
Saving me…

I cry out to you
Yet all I hear is me…
Begging silently in the dark
Comforted only by my tears…
Hear me please…
Feel me please…
Allow me another chance

The loss of you is immense
It overwhelms my senses

The feeling numbs my skin
The pain flows through my heart
All I hear is my screams and cries
All I see are my tears…

What I’d give to have you again
To caress your shell
To taste your lips
To feel you around me
You scratch at me
"I long for more…"
The screaming echoes forever
I remember it…
Yet it seems like an eternity ago…
You cried out to me
And called my name
longing to bring you pleasure
make you yell "yes!"
make you tell me "more!!!"
You told me more…
Than I’d ever heard before…


I miss the way we were
And how different things were then
I miss the laughs, the love we shared
I need you back again...
Please don't give up on me
I need you more than ever
If we fight now, like we did back then...
We can get back our forever...


just remember what we had... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 341 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
just remember what we had...

Contributed by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 01:56:49 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Nothing is left…
Echoing only in my head…
These words of forgiveness

They repeat over and over…
I’m sorry
So sorry…

But only I can hear them…

They resound through the night
Screaming through the darkness
Keeping me awake,
Keeping me alive…

This hope
The longing
Driving me onward
Towards our end…

Losing grip of you
Watching you fade
Obscuring this dream we shared…

This want to have and hold
Yet only being pushed away…

Remembering your skin
The tingling between us…
The way you enlightened me…

You showed me the way
Showed me who to be…

Pressing through the dark…
Into you…
Slipping on your ice slick love
Trying to get my footing…
The neck of a goddess
Calling to me
Begging for my touch
The way I beg to her…
Kissing silken skin
The salty taste of sweetness
My perfect salvation
Saving the best for last
Saving me…

I cry out to you
Yet all I hear is me…
Begging silently in the dark
Comforted only by my tears…
Hear me please…
Feel me please…
Allow me another chance

The loss of you is immense
It overwhelms my senses

The feeling numbs my skin
The pain flows through my heart
All I hear is my screams and cries
All I see are my tears…

What I’d give to have you again
To caress your shell
To taste your lips
To feel you around me
You scratch at me
"I long for more…"
The screaming echoes forever
I remember it…
Yet it seems like an eternity ago…
You cried out to me
And called my name
longing to bring you pleasure
make you yell "yes!"
make you tell me "more!!!"
You told me more…
Than I’d ever heard before…


I miss the way we were
And how different things were then
I miss the laughs, the love we shared
I need you back again...
Please don't give up on me
I need you more than ever
If we fight now, like we did back then...
We can get back our forever...


just remember what we had...




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Re: just remember what we had... (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 02:03:14 AM AEST
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awwwwwww nice poem i liked it:)


Re: just remember what we had... (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 02:55:20 AM AEST
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very nice poem...


Re: just remember what we had... (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 09:26:15 AM AEST
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I really liked this line... "If we fight now, like we did back then..." Ain't that the truth! Fighting is true love. Very good, always an ispiration you are.

Aq.


Re: just remember what we had... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 01:59:11 PM AEST
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very beautiful write and breath taking. I bet she remembers and always will




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