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[aid] => mick
[title] => Broken
[time] => 2005-12-19 23:41:09
[hometext] => This poem is straight from my heart. ^ ^; I really liked how it turned out. I would really appreciate comments...i've just been down in the dump lately! Thank you.
[bodytext] => Why am I so broken And how did you make me this way I’ve felt like this, ever since I saw you with her that day I was so stupid not to notice But maybe I was just too blind to see What was right there all along For, you wanted nothing to do with me You wanted her, only her And now my eyes are filled with hate You ripped my heart up, threw it away And now there’s nothing left for you to take You’ve already stripped me everything And you broken my pride You left me all alone, And thought you took away all my places to hide But you left one place open And that place is my smile, in which I’m bound ‘Cause I hide behind it all day And Pray to God I wont be found Because this smile that I wear I wear all day long All because of your heat For, that is somewhere I don’t belong Then as soon as I get home I flash my mom my smile When I turn, my smile breaks As I go to my room for a while No matter how hard I try I know there will never be a place for me There’s only one thing that I can do That’s to watch from afar and dream of you Why am I so broken And how did you make me this way I’ve felt like this, ever since I saw you with her that day [comments] => 7 [counter] => 287 [topic] => 22 [informant] => misunderstood_gurl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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