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Unwanted Snowflakes
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 04:12:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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snowflakes pitter patter outside my door
snowflakes, your not welcome here anymore
i see you sneaking up on me white and clean or so you seem
im just hoping that your presence is just a dream
you come unenvited and your always too willing to stay
even if its just long enough to chill my heart then melt away
you appear to be gentle but your just as cold as ice
so before falling onto my door step you better think twice
keep your bitterness and cold to yourself and dont come anywhere near
snowflakes, your just not weclome here
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Re: Unwanted Snowflakes
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 05:56:30 PM AEST (User
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I loved this, sense the undertone in it also
nicely done!
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Re: Unwanted Snowflakes
(User Rating: 1 ) by detourchick on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 07:15:21 PM AEST (User
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not gonna lie reaally liked it |
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