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Hate This World
Contributed by
Devils-confused-daugther
on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 09:31:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I hate this world,
because i twirled into it
with life on my side
but hate in the shadows
May i leave this world?
The blades look soo inviting
No one's invading
Out of this world,
i twirl again
but i'm being pulled back by...YOU!
No! No! Leave Me Bee!
No!... i love you...soo i can't let u!
You must love me, u havent let go of me yet...
thats cos i dont want to
but its your bedtime isnt it?
i'd stay awake just to watch u sleep
and watch over you,
just to know that you're ok.
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2005-12-19 09:31:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hate This World
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 12:44:07 PM AEST (User
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The world was designed with love, and because of hate, the design was altered, became much different. Since the change, man has not learned his lesson, yet He must soon; we all better pray the second coming will come, before we completely destroy our world and ourselves. At the end of your poem, I could not help but to read in love, from whoever was speaking. Those are the words I hear when I pray, that He stays awake for me, and the world, watching over all that invite Him in for our safety, so that we will be ok. I very much appreciate your poem. Raquelleah |
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