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Array ( [sid] => 111684 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heart Broken [time] => 2005-12-18 01:27:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She broke my heart like no other,
I wanted to treat her,
Like a mother,
She left sad in my place,
She said shut up,
And get out of my face,
I want to know what I did wrong,
And she told me the story is too long,
She told me I was like a brother,
But I can treat her like no other,
I asked her to take my presents,
And she told me to get out of her presence,
I wanted to know why,
But then,
She looked me in the eye,
And said she loves another guy.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 471 [topic] => 22 [informant] => stecks [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Heart Broken

Contributed by stecks on Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 01:27:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

She broke my heart like no other,
I wanted to treat her,
Like a mother,
She left sad in my place,
She said shut up,
And get out of my face,
I want to know what I did wrong,
And she told me the story is too long,
She told me I was like a brother,
But I can treat her like no other,
I asked her to take my presents,
And she told me to get out of her presence,
I wanted to know why,
But then,
She looked me in the eye,
And said she loves another guy.

Copyright © stecks ... [ 2005-12-18 01:27:20]
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Re: Heart Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 06:51:50 AM AEST
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Ouch!.. This was a very expressful poem.. The ending lines were like getting bit from something sharp... It is sad when people fall in love with someone else and they make you crumble and want to die... Well done..

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Christina

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