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Be my only friend,
Shall the walls of the dark
Earth be my only bed,
Can I not sleep within the
Flowers of sweet aroma
Instead of dirt covering my
Bed…
Leaving my soul so dark
And gray with weary,
Can I not rest in a garden?
Flowers of sweetness tickle
My nose,
Making my bed within a
Glasshouse filled with
Roses,
With hues of colors of
Carnations,
Let my soul be fill with
Love,
Wherever I go
May the rainbow rain its
Beauty far and wide..
Than I know, peace will
Forever reign,
And give you light as
Beautiful as the sky,
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Within The Darkness

Contributed by candysears on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 08:07:09 PM in AEST
Topic: fictional

Shall I die leaving misery to
Be my only friend,
Shall the walls of the dark
Earth be my only bed,
Can I not sleep within the
Flowers of sweet aroma
Instead of dirt covering my
Bed…
Leaving my soul so dark
And gray with weary,
Can I not rest in a garden?
Flowers of sweetness tickle
My nose,
Making my bed within a
Glasshouse filled with
Roses,
With hues of colors of
Carnations,
Let my soul be fill with
Love,
Wherever I go
May the rainbow rain its
Beauty far and wide..
Than I know, peace will
Forever reign,
And give you light as
Beautiful as the sky,

Copyright Â© candysears ... [ 2005-12-17 20:07:09]
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Re: Within The Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by ArsenicMyst on Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 12:42:17 AM AEST
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i love the depth with which you approach
this homage to melancholy

beautifully written

*·.¸¸¸¸.·*arsenic

Re: Within The Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 10:23:29 AM AEST
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This is quite beautiful in every way, a fine peice of poetic benevolance, lovely emotions
set 2 the tune of compassion . . .

Ben

Re: Within The Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by jessejames on Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 08:21:11 PM AEST
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great write nice imagery

Re: Within The Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 05:37:23 PM AEST
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really nice write, you had great imagery and i agree with ( um ok i forgot the name...but i think it was arsenic?...) sorry if i got it wrong. but i def. agree with them. it was beautiful approach to such a sad topic.

Re: Within The Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by WhyAmIHere on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 07:16:09 PM AEST
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I feel like that sometimes. I like the imagry.

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