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Array ( [sid] => 111660 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Beast [time] => 2005-12-17 14:38:11 [hometext] => Though love is pain, you can't avoid it, here's to those who think they can By: Tony Shaneyfelt [bodytext] => It sucked me in and spat me out
The pain was unbearable I began to shout
A figure in the mist responded to my plee
All was visible but the face I couldn't see
The stanger, now closer, had the same beast inside
Realizing this, I ran quickly to hide
This stranger claimed to bring me no pain
The beast I had seen, was said to be slain
The same monster grabbed me, the voice told a lie
My fate is inevitable, despite how I try
The steps that kill, kill me repeat
It's beastly methods remain descrete
Sucking me in without movement or sound
Spitting me out, I just lay on the ground
I saw little reason to keep up this fight
So I kept to the dirt with eyes shut tight
The beast just turned and walked away
Then jumped to the sky, into a new day
That moment I discovered, as the beast soared above
This thing was no monster, it was only love
I had defeated a human emotion
Not truly vanquished, but fought with devotion
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The Beast

Contributed by lifeslittleangel on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 02:38:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



It sucked me in and spat me out
The pain was unbearable I began to shout
A figure in the mist responded to my plee
All was visible but the face I couldn't see
The stanger, now closer, had the same beast inside
Realizing this, I ran quickly to hide
This stranger claimed to bring me no pain
The beast I had seen, was said to be slain
The same monster grabbed me, the voice told a lie
My fate is inevitable, despite how I try
The steps that kill, kill me repeat
It's beastly methods remain descrete
Sucking me in without movement or sound
Spitting me out, I just lay on the ground
I saw little reason to keep up this fight
So I kept to the dirt with eyes shut tight
The beast just turned and walked away
Then jumped to the sky, into a new day
That moment I discovered, as the beast soared above
This thing was no monster, it was only love
I had defeated a human emotion
Not truly vanquished, but fought with devotion




Copyright © lifeslittleangel ... [ 2005-12-17 14:38:11]
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Re: The Beast (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobsKK on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 02:42:01 PM AEST
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Wow, that was REALLY powerful. Great imagery! :D Luv KK


Re: The Beast (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 03:23:44 PM AEST
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Well done ,,,fantastic Write,,keep em coming,,,Eddy


Re: The Beast (User Rating: 1 )
by Unbreakable on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:47:53 PM AEST
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Good concept, well-written. Rhythm could use a little work, other than that..great work, keep it up

Krystal




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