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Array ( [sid] => 111645 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Individualism [time] => 2005-12-17 08:37:00 [hometext] => I have been having trouble writing lately... This is the best work I've been able to come up with [bodytext] => Words are just words
Even if they make sense
It doesn’t really matter what you say
As long as you say it
No one actually cares
As long as you are smiling
As long as you stay away

You still want recognition
As you slip into the crowd
It isn’t really their fault
They just look out for themselves

If you try to breakaway
You’ll be singled out
And easy prey
If you stay in the mob
You’ll suffocate anyway

If you forget the tears
You’ll become a void
And then you will still be annoyed
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 21 [informant] => EverlastingDawn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Individualism

Contributed by EverlastingDawn on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 08:37:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Words are just words
Even if they make sense
It doesn’t really matter what you say
As long as you say it
No one actually cares
As long as you are smiling
As long as you stay away

You still want recognition
As you slip into the crowd
It isn’t really their fault
They just look out for themselves

If you try to breakaway
You’ll be singled out
And easy prey
If you stay in the mob
You’ll suffocate anyway

If you forget the tears
You’ll become a void
And then you will still be annoyed

Copyright Â© EverlastingDawn ... [ 2005-12-17 08:37:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Individualism (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 01:42:28 PM AEST
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Hm, very interesting. I liked the felings that were expressed through out this poem. SLipSiX.

Re: Individualism (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 09:10:53 PM AEST
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dunno wat it was but that struck a chord with
me. Maybe im feelin similar to this. fairly
uninspired at the moment as my comment
might suggest, well written though

diz

Re: Individualism (User Rating: 1 )
by tiggytom on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 05:45:54 AM AEST
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Nice write I enjoyed this

Thanks

Tom :)

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