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Array ( [sid] => 111644 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eterpathetic [time] => 2005-12-17 07:37:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => All I feel is nothing when I start to see
The ridiculous obsession with other peoples lives
For what are you interested, for what is your purpose
Does it really make a difference to you if they are wrong or right
Soon in time they will discover that they should have listened
To the words of their mother

Still trying to include yourself in other peoples’ stress
Have you not got enough off your chest
Again I’m being asked for the reason that this is
I have no answer, just learn to dismiss
Time will reveal all to the one
Whom has nowhere to turn
Has nowhere to run

Alone in this cosmic bloodstream
Vessels bursting through, never seen
Travelling nowhere to end up where you’ve been
The rich and the beautiful
Live a life that’s plentiful
Planning for migration to the planet which we see as red

To leave behind a world that’s dead
Resourceful in their greed
Ignorant to those which bleed
If really thought through can they truly be accepted
Amongst those of higher intellectual capacity
With higher intelligence comes a higher emotional intolerance

Once seen what these few have done to their own
Are they really going to allow them a clone
Acceptance within the confines of this earth
Only exists as brainwashed from birth

To an outside species they have none of this
They will judge purely on what’s been seen
Naive are the selfish to the fact that we’ve always been between
The microscopic dish and the spherical ship

So the mighty and powerful that now rule this earth
Will get the biggest shock when they’re kicked to the dirt
And the people like the me and you who’ve forever been kept under the gun
Will be the ones who’ll be introduced to the sun
We will be the ones given the gift of spiritual enlightenment
For the self destructive governmental bodies
Will be oh so lonely in their unearthly homes.

The universe exists only because it is one
A disease within its walls is what we have become
Powerless as a force we people have become
No longer even communicating by means of our own
Everything being monitored, caught up in your worldy possessions
Forgetting the fact that nothing can be taken
When your time has come and you start your journey returning to the sun
With all the knowledge and compassion which you should’ve learned
Whilst partaking in your vacation on this place called earth.

Punished for you will not be
As observed by our cosmic father have we all been
No need for explanation for it all he has seen
Rewarding the real, the ones who can feel
Whilst returning the lost so that they can learn empathy
And dwell as they must for the whole of eternity.
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Eterpathetic

Contributed by tiggytom on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 07:37:27 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



All I feel is nothing when I start to see
The ridiculous obsession with other peoples lives
For what are you interested, for what is your purpose
Does it really make a difference to you if they are wrong or right
Soon in time they will discover that they should have listened
To the words of their mother

Still trying to include yourself in other peoples’ stress
Have you not got enough off your chest
Again I’m being asked for the reason that this is
I have no answer, just learn to dismiss
Time will reveal all to the one
Whom has nowhere to turn
Has nowhere to run

Alone in this cosmic bloodstream
Vessels bursting through, never seen
Travelling nowhere to end up where you’ve been
The rich and the beautiful
Live a life that’s plentiful
Planning for migration to the planet which we see as red

To leave behind a world that’s dead
Resourceful in their greed
Ignorant to those which bleed
If really thought through can they truly be accepted
Amongst those of higher intellectual capacity
With higher intelligence comes a higher emotional intolerance

Once seen what these few have done to their own
Are they really going to allow them a clone
Acceptance within the confines of this earth
Only exists as brainwashed from birth

To an outside species they have none of this
They will judge purely on what’s been seen
Naive are the selfish to the fact that we’ve always been between
The microscopic dish and the spherical ship

So the mighty and powerful that now rule this earth
Will get the biggest shock when they’re kicked to the dirt
And the people like the me and you who’ve forever been kept under the gun
Will be the ones who’ll be introduced to the sun
We will be the ones given the gift of spiritual enlightenment
For the self destructive governmental bodies
Will be oh so lonely in their unearthly homes.

The universe exists only because it is one
A disease within its walls is what we have become
Powerless as a force we people have become
No longer even communicating by means of our own
Everything being monitored, caught up in your worldy possessions
Forgetting the fact that nothing can be taken
When your time has come and you start your journey returning to the sun
With all the knowledge and compassion which you should’ve learned
Whilst partaking in your vacation on this place called earth.

Punished for you will not be
As observed by our cosmic father have we all been
No need for explanation for it all he has seen
Rewarding the real, the ones who can feel
Whilst returning the lost so that they can learn empathy
And dwell as they must for the whole of eternity.




Copyright © tiggytom ... [ 2005-12-17 07:37:27]
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Re: Eterpathetic (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 08:06:12 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
huggs,
emy




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