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Array ( [sid] => 111616 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forgetting about us... [time] => 2005-12-16 20:50:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This road we’ve traveled to many times
The angry words
The awkward silence
The way we cry…

Time has come to face it
See it how it is
We can’t keep pushing each other away
We are falling apart…

If I said I’m sorry a thousand times
You wouldn’t hear it once
You never notice the good times
You focus only on my failures
And not the love we share

My tears form a river
And I’m swept loose by the flow
I’m following blindly
Trusting in you
Praying for the best
Hoping the worst has past

I knew you years ago
But oh how you’ve changed…
I remember how you smiled
The way you used to glance at me
Peeking… hiding…
Not wanting me to see
Yet hoping that I did...
Wishing that I noticed…

Well I always did
And I always will…

Yet you slip away so easily
Not letting me grab hold
You push me away from you
Out of the safety of your arms…
You left me all alone
To fight theses memories
And to forget about us
and this love we had... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 269 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Forgetting about us...

Contributed by holderofthestone on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 08:50:14 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



This road we’ve traveled to many times
The angry words
The awkward silence
The way we cry…

Time has come to face it
See it how it is
We can’t keep pushing each other away
We are falling apart…

If I said I’m sorry a thousand times
You wouldn’t hear it once
You never notice the good times
You focus only on my failures
And not the love we share

My tears form a river
And I’m swept loose by the flow
I’m following blindly
Trusting in you
Praying for the best
Hoping the worst has past

I knew you years ago
But oh how you’ve changed…
I remember how you smiled
The way you used to glance at me
Peeking… hiding…
Not wanting me to see
Yet hoping that I did...
Wishing that I noticed…

Well I always did
And I always will…

Yet you slip away so easily
Not letting me grab hold
You push me away from you
Out of the safety of your arms…
You left me all alone
To fight theses memories
And to forget about us
and this love we had...




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Re: Forgetting about us... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 09:28:27 PM AEST
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most tender touching write. One of the most haunting feelings in the world is holding on to someone letting go. Im so sorry for your pain

hugssss to make you feel better if it will

Michelle


Re: Forgetting about us... (User Rating: 1 )
by WaterFountainOfTears on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 01:57:25 AM AEST
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WOW.
that is a POWERFUL write...

You did an AMAZING job describing how it was and how its changed...

I honestly feel for you as I've been through this recently...

Great great job.


Re: Forgetting about us... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 02:00:14 PM AEST
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i can feel every motion that you put into this. its wonderful. You are not alone at all




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