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Array ( [sid] => 111614 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Im sorry [time] => 2005-12-16 20:29:03 [hometext] => this is for someone who i hurt but love so much and want her to know of my love and it's realness please comment [bodytext] => as i watch the sunset
***i hold back a tear***
knowing that i hurt the one
***that i hold so dear***
*** *** ***

i told her of my love but
***it was to her disbelief***
now all my heart can feel
***is anguish and grief***
*** *** ***

why do we hurt the ones we love
***this question has no answer***
but the emptiness i feel
***is eating me alive like cancer***
*** *** ***

i wish i could take it all back
***every foolish work i've said***
if you never trust my love
***my heart will feel better ***
with my body dead
*** *** ***

i don't know what you want
***but you deserve the stars and the moon***
i just hope the day comes when you trust my love
***and i hope it's coming soon***
*** *** ***

i can no longer sit here
***depressed and broken hearted***
so lets get out of here and
*** go back to when our love first started***
*** *** ***
*** *** [comments] => 2 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 2 [informant] => outlaw_mutiny [notes] => Edited for Spelling as Requested by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Im sorry

Contributed by outlaw_mutiny on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 08:29:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

as i watch the sunset
***i hold back a tear***
knowing that i hurt the one
***that i hold so dear***
*** *** ***

i told her of my love but
***it was to her disbelief***
now all my heart can feel
***is anguish and grief***
*** *** ***

why do we hurt the ones we love
***this question has no answer***
but the emptiness i feel
***is eating me alive like cancer***
*** *** ***

i wish i could take it all back
***every foolish work i've said***
if you never trust my love
***my heart will feel better ***
with my body dead
*** *** ***

i don't know what you want
***but you deserve the stars and the moon***
i just hope the day comes when you trust my love
***and i hope it's coming soon***
*** *** ***

i can no longer sit here
***depressed and broken hearted***
so lets get out of here and
*** go back to when our love first started***
*** *** ***
*** ***

Copyright © outlaw_mutiny ... [ 2005-12-16 20:29:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Im sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 09:31:47 PM AEST
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I hope that your roads cross and come back to one another. Your apology so sincere more people need to be this way

I loved the style and flow to this write

Michelle

Re: Im sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:26:00 AM AEST
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awwwwwww how sweet .. i love the sound and flow to this poem:)

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