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[aid] => mick
[title] => Just Breathe
[time] => 2005-12-16 14:01:21
[hometext] => Some one told me to breathe and I finally did
[bodytext] => Just breathe
Forget your pain
Let their words leave your mind
Don't lose yourself again
Just breathe
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 245
[topic] => 48
[informant] => Jen54
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Just Breathe
Contributed by
Jen54
on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:01:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Just breathe
Forget your pain
Let their words leave your mind
Don't lose yourself again
Just breathe
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2005-12-16 14:01:21]
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Re: Just Breathe
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:10:40 PM AEST
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| well need to just sit and breath good write |
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Re: Just Breathe
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by SocialMisfit on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:14:03 PM AEST
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your poety is so simple...it has that amazing quality of just eloquence...no need for fancy words or comnplex stanza's its just beautifal...i love it.
SM |
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Re: Just Breathe
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by sararose1950 on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:24:15 PM AEST
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such beautiful, simple, truthful words-
very very well done.
Peace and Light |
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Re: Just Breathe
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by Spike on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:28:04 PM AEST
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A poem as close in structure to the subject matter as it can get. A relaxing, calming experience in itself while neatly encapsulating a particular experience and some very good advice. Well done.
Spike |
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Re: Just Breathe
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by WaterFountainOfTears on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 02:05:28 AM AEST
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I definitely feel for this poem ... We all need to take a time out (well, a breather, tehe) every once in awhile.
Thank you for the advice. |
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Re: Just Breathe
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 05:22:37 PM AEST
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Short, sweet, beautiful, & insightful. Very nice write, Jennifer. I love it.
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: Just Breathe
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 04:51:16 PM AEST
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This is so simple and so awesome.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Just Breathe
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by hoist1atca on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 12:35:46 AM AEST
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Good words to live by-
I like this-
Words are just that-
Joe |
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