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Array ( [sid] => 111587 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => loud [time] => 2005-12-16 10:49:15 [hometext] => please leave you comments [bodytext] => Run away little boy
run and hide
dont you dare
tell my lies
I'm sorry my eyes
are full of rage

No
dont silence yourself
be loud scream your pain
don't go away
It will never be the same
Sad and pathedic
little me
shut me away
never to be seen
I'm sorry I
can never be you queen
I thought you
knew me
violently mean
broken now
scarred much to deep

I know now your
not that weak
show you hand
make me scream
loud and cold
don't be decieved [comments] => 2 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 43 [informant] => jessalynn [notes] => |||||||The following comment has been carried over from the now deleted, duplicate submission of this poem: "Re: loud (User Rating: 1) by ms_me on Friday, December 16 2005 @ 13:45:22 CST (User Info | Send a Message | Journal) hello I am new to this site. Please don't take this the wrong way but i really don't get the poem. I like the way it was written though. And I would like if you'd explain it. Please read my poem and leave comments also. I wrote it when i was about 15 or so." ♦Moderator_14♦||||||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
loud

Contributed by jessalynn on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 10:49:15 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Run away little boy
run and hide
dont you dare
tell my lies
I'm sorry my eyes
are full of rage

No
dont silence yourself
be loud scream your pain
don't go away
It will never be the same
Sad and pathedic
little me
shut me away
never to be seen
I'm sorry I
can never be you queen
I thought you
knew me
violently mean
broken now
scarred much to deep

I know now your
not that weak
show you hand
make me scream
loud and cold
don't be decieved




Copyright © jessalynn ... [ 2005-12-16 10:49:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: loud (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:28:47 PM AEST
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interesting write could be placed better but it works
r.m.wilder


Re: loud (User Rating: 1 )
by glassicallyunsuperficial on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 03:02:51 AM AEST
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I can relate to this.
I am 15 now.
thats why, I guess.
cheers,
-glass




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