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Array ( [sid] => 111573 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => save me.... [time] => 2005-12-16 01:27:36 [hometext] => another poetry pleading for help, in this dark world i have gotten so lost in [bodytext] => filter through my apathy
lack of feeling with
my hearts own atrophy
hopeless and lost
bolted to the ground
miles from the cross

...lord save me,
i dont want to die,
but the pain in my heart
is all i can feel.
you touch seems withdrawn
please give me the faith
to know your love aint gone.

my life seems a cliche
the world is silent
and i feel like screaming
ripping the world to pieces
trying to set me free
release the rage
come on scream with me...

**** your life
follow me to sin
who is going to stop me?
certinly not you, and to hell with HIM

christian is what i wants to be
but a sinner condemed is all i see
shouting to let lose the sin
but begging for strength within
all i wants to do is die....
how long can the blade be stoped
by the tears i cry?

lord save me...
i have forgotten the love
and have fallen to sin
lord save me
from this devil i seem to be [comments] => 7 [counter] => 549 [topic] => 43 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
save me....

Contributed by socialmisfit on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 01:27:36 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



filter through my apathy
lack of feeling with
my hearts own atrophy
hopeless and lost
bolted to the ground
miles from the cross

...lord save me,
i dont want to die,
but the pain in my heart
is all i can feel.
you touch seems withdrawn
please give me the faith
to know your love aint gone.

my life seems a cliche
the world is silent
and i feel like screaming
ripping the world to pieces
trying to set me free
release the rage
come on scream with me...

**** your life
follow me to sin
who is going to stop me?
certinly not you, and to hell with HIM

christian is what i wants to be
but a sinner condemed is all i see
shouting to let lose the sin
but begging for strength within
all i wants to do is die....
how long can the blade be stoped
by the tears i cry?

lord save me...
i have forgotten the love
and have fallen to sin
lord save me
from this devil i seem to be




Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2005-12-16 01:27:36]
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Re: save me.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 01:52:33 AM AEST
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very well written.
I must say we all sin in some ways or another its way of life.
no ones perfect


Re: save me.... (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:26:53 AM AEST
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nice write. . keep up the good work. . and the best of wishes to you..
~Justin L.~


Re: save me.... (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:05:50 PM AEST
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Wow this is sad, and you really poured your feelings into this one...We can, at times, be our own worst enemy. but hang in there. I'm sure things will start to improve for you. This is a strongly emotive piece, good job expressing yourself.



Scorp.


Re: save me.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:21:26 PM AEST
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Very sad and powerful write. From someone who has been there don't give up. right now your at the middle of the tunnel not yet seeing the light at the end but it is there.


Re: save me.... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 12:25:08 AM AEST
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Very sad but amazingly written.
Jesus Christ saved us all at the cross. No one has the right to judge u or make u feel any less luved than any of us.
I don't claim anything but the fact that I know without a doubt I'm Jesus kid. Stop feeling this way and if someone brings these feelings on the stay away from them. Sorry to get so carried away but I know how u feel and those feelings are man made not from God. God is luv and contention is from the dark side.
Please take it easy on yourself.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy


Re: save me.... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 12:26:09 AM AEST
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Very sad but amazingly written.
Jesus Chridst saved us all at the cross. No one has the right to judge u or make u feel any less luved than any of us.
I don't claim anything but the fact that I know without a doubt I'm Jesus kid. Stop feeling this way and if someone brings these feelings on the stay away from them. Sorry to get so carried away but I know how u feel and those feelings are man made not from God. God is luv and contention is from the dark side.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy
Please take it easy on yourself.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy


Re: save me.... (User Rating: 1 )
by LostAmbition on Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 02:18:32 AM AEST
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very sad stuff
hope things get
better for ya soon
keep writing
maybe it'll help
Good poem




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