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Array ( [sid] => 111563 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Mirror [time] => 2005-12-15 20:34:19 [hometext] => To all the people who love somone and do nothing about it... By:Tony Shaneyfelt [bodytext] => what am I still waiting for
to forget the treatment I can't ignore
eyes still burning through that reflection
trusting them to drive with the utmost protection
the gift of immortality, is now something to compare
to the feeling felt real, from that false stare
the feeling was millions of butterflies
while bewitched by those green eyes
then those insects started dying
till but one remained inside me flying
this one will die with all the rest
until only silence inhabits this chest
so many words had gone unspoken
just forget about the eyes, and the mirror, now broken [comments] => 4 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 55 [informant] => lifeslittleangel [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Broken Mirror

Contributed by lifeslittleangel on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 08:34:19 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

what am I still waiting for
to forget the treatment I can't ignore
eyes still burning through that reflection
trusting them to drive with the utmost protection
the gift of immortality, is now something to compare
to the feeling felt real, from that false stare
the feeling was millions of butterflies
while bewitched by those green eyes
then those insects started dying
till but one remained inside me flying
this one will die with all the rest
until only silence inhabits this chest
so many words had gone unspoken
just forget about the eyes, and the mirror, now broken

Copyright © lifeslittleangel ... [ 2005-12-15 20:34:19]
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Re: Broken Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 04:11:01 PM AEST
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This is deep and nice.

Take care.

Scott

Re: Broken Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 04:16:43 PM AEST
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The trust has been completely destroyed, and in that trust it included dreams of two people, or one persons dreams were strengthened in that trust. Now that, that trust has been broken, the confidence is going and the dreams are fading and dying and soon all will be gone. Insects were illustrated, hopes, and I pray you will find the light, the truth, the way to go on. Wonderful poem and I thank you for its creation. Raquel Leah :D

Re: Broken Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by lifeslittleangel on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 11:51:11 PM AEST
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Tony im not just saying this because ur my brother,we may not be family but uin my weyes are my family not friends please keep it up on writing love u lotz stephey

Re: Broken Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 05:14:24 PM AEST
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nice write keep it up
-Jen

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