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Array ( [sid] => 111511 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She Can't Be Really Gone [time] => 2005-12-15 02:37:24 [hometext] => I wrote this poem about the early death of my niece, who was only 2 when she died for no reason. Please Read And comment my poem.. thank you. [bodytext] => A river of tears, Running down my face.
While this throw pillow, I embrace.
Dark of night, Is coming near.
But the new day dawning, Is what I fear.
Like shattered glass, Scattered around.
Another heart is broken, And left on the ground.

You can hear the angels coming, Down from the sky.
To take another soul, To whom I never said goodbye.
I cry out, And tell them to wait.
Another soul is gone, And I am to late.
Heavens awaiting for her, To enter the Gates of Pearl.
Gone? She can't be, Because she just came into this world.
~by: Justin L.~ [comments] => 4 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 32 [informant] => jdawg [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

She Can't Be Really Gone

Contributed by jdawg on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 02:37:24 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

A river of tears, Running down my face.
While this throw pillow, I embrace.
Dark of night, Is coming near.
But the new day dawning, Is what I fear.
Like shattered glass, Scattered around.
Another heart is broken, And left on the ground.

You can hear the angels coming, Down from the sky.
To take another soul, To whom I never said goodbye.
I cry out, And tell them to wait.
Another soul is gone, And I am to late.
Heavens awaiting for her, To enter the Gates of Pearl.
Gone? She can't be, Because she just came into this world.
~by: Justin L.~

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Re: She Can't Be Really Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by sandypoet on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 05:52:26 AM AEST
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My nose tingles, My eyes fill up with tears.

Questions not answered .. WHY? what is the purpose ? I lost a sister when I was younger. she was nine yrs old. I am about to turn 40. pain still there. But I know the God we serve. glad he has a plan so we can meet again.. only thing that keeps me going.. love your poem.

Re: She Can't Be Really Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by OzChick on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 06:45:23 AM AEST
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Oh Justin this is so sad, I am so sorry for your loss. It definitely feels unfair when a child dies. I can relate to this poem as I once went to a four year old's funeral. Took me a while to accept it, the result was a poem called 'Bertie'. This poem of yours speaks volumes.
Great write.
Blessings, Jenny.

Re: She Can't Be Really Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by babyjay on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 05:19:19 PM AEST
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that is a good write. that made me cry. i know how it feels to love somone and lose them when they didn't even get to see the wonderful world but they are in a better place

Re: She Can't Be Really Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 06:03:11 AM AEST
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Sorry about your darling niece. It is so sad and I hope that you have sweet little memories of her and believe one day she will be together with you and her family again.
coni

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