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so i can fill a soul
I need the sun to see myself
deep within this bowl

I filled my heart of hollows
with echoes of my grief
"My art is of the sorrows!!
..and that's become belief...."

I know my strings so well
i'm a puppet in this play
I jump on stage and tell
"i'm told what i'm to say..!!!"

Bring the soup for me to sip
so i can rot in wood
My tears will sometimes tend to drip
like rains that never could...

dw

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A puppet in this play

Contributed by In_a_While on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:08:30 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Send me all the sands from Hell
so i can fill a soul
I need the sun to see myself
deep within this bowl

I filled my heart of hollows
with echoes of my grief
"My art is of the sorrows!!
..and that's become belief...."

I know my strings so well
i'm a puppet in this play
I jump on stage and tell
"i'm told what i'm to say..!!!"

Bring the soup for me to sip
so i can rot in wood
My tears will sometimes tend to drip
like rains that never could...

dw





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Re: A puppet in this play (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:13:35 PM AEST
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Very creative.
huggs,
emy


Re: A puppet in this play (User Rating: 1 )
by lifeslittleangel on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 02:03:36 PM AEST
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great writing God would want that in his book.
Very creative.

Stony


Re: A puppet in this play (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 02:49:09 PM AEST
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excellant write, flowed perfectly
Michelle


Re: A puppet in this play (User Rating: 1 )
by blacksabbath026 on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 03:44:09 PM AEST
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a nicely written poem, very deep and thought provoking, good job


Re: A puppet in this play (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 04:19:49 PM AEST
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Dwayne a thought provoking write excellently penned. Although I can feel the sadness behind ur write. Chin up sweet guy. U have friends here who care for you.
Brilliant as always.
*heartfelt hugs for a very dear friend*
~sue~


Re: A puppet in this play (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 04:44:53 PM AEST
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gj, mind breaker ty rl


Re: A puppet in this play (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 01:50:28 AM AEST
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great poem, nicely written.. keep it up..


Re: A puppet in this play (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 02:33:13 PM AEST
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this is really good. I liked it alot and i hope you get through these struggles that ur dealing with>..

take care
christina




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