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And that I will no longer see u
I want to change this, so bad
But there’s nothing that I can do

But your memory will mot be lost
Fore, I’ve loved you for so long
But loving you felt so right
And couldn’t have possibly been wrong

People told me I was crazy
Four loving you so much
And I admit that I still shiver
At the thought of your touch

People told me you would hurt me
And eventually you’d go away
I have to say they were right
But also wrong in many ways

There were wrong
When they told me you’d go away
Because in my heart,
You will forever, stay

It’s hard to believe you’re gone
And that I will no longer see u
I want to change this, so bad
But there’s nothing that I can do
…But hold onto you
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Nothing i can do

Contributed by misunderstood_gurl on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:15:27 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It’s hard to believe you’re gone
And that I will no longer see u
I want to change this, so bad
But there’s nothing that I can do

But your memory will mot be lost
Fore, I’ve loved you for so long
But loving you felt so right
And couldn’t have possibly been wrong

People told me I was crazy
Four loving you so much
And I admit that I still shiver
At the thought of your touch

People told me you would hurt me
And eventually you’d go away
I have to say they were right
But also wrong in many ways

There were wrong
When they told me you’d go away
Because in my heart,
You will forever, stay

It’s hard to believe you’re gone
And that I will no longer see u
I want to change this, so bad
But there’s nothing that I can do
…But hold onto you

Copyright Â© misunderstood_gurl ... [ 2005-12-13 21:15:27]
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Re: Nothing i can do (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:21:16 PM AEST
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Sad but sweet, nice job.

Re: Nothing i can do (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:39:49 PM AEST
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sad and sweet nice job!!!!

Re: Nothing i can do (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:39:53 PM AEST
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good write. it's ok to hold on for a certian amount of time, but don't dwell on the past, or it may engulf you swallowing your future in memories of "what if's" when you should be thinking, "what now?". just my opinion. do what you wish, but keep up the good work
-trini

Re: Nothing i can do (User Rating: 1 )
by OzChick on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 11:55:30 PM AEST
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So sad and bittersweet. This is a good poem, but I suggest correcting the typos.
A good write though, thanks for sharing.
~Jenny~

Re: Nothing i can do (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:37:10 AM AEST
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There were wrong
When they told me you’d go away
Because in my heart,
You will forever, stay

Left to memories, less problems, enjoy those thoughts of what was.. beautiful poem, nice creation... very deep in a wonderful sad way... neeext... RL

Re: Nothing i can do (User Rating: 1 )
by Inspirational101 on Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 10:33:53 PM AEST
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Hey,
I can relate so well to this poem. It is so sad, i feel like that with my boyfriend. He is leaving me. Nothing we can do.
Keep writing you are great and have lots of talent,
With luv,
Inspirational101

Re: Nothing i can do (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 03:26:40 AM AEST
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I love your poem. I can relate so much to this.. thank you for sharing.. god bless and best of wishes to you now and in the future.. keep up the great work.
~Justin L.~

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