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Array ( [sid] => 111429 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Final sunset [time] => 2005-12-13 17:51:35 [hometext] => in this poem the sun setting represents the end of the day wich represents the end of my days please comment [bodytext] => The evening sun is sinking fast

Taking with it my lonesome past

The day is ending but i dont stand alone

For the angels have come to carry me home

The sorrow is gone, my father is near

I'm no longer a friend of shame nor fear

Life is a poem that doesn't always rhyme

I say as the sun sets for the very last time

I'll soon be riding the waves and the crashing tide

Knowing that things are better on the other side
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Final sunset

Contributed by outlaw_mutiny on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 05:51:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The evening sun is sinking fast

Taking with it my lonesome past

The day is ending but i dont stand alone

For the angels have come to carry me home

The sorrow is gone, my father is near

I'm no longer a friend of shame nor fear

Life is a poem that doesn't always rhyme

I say as the sun sets for the very last time

I'll soon be riding the waves and the crashing tide

Knowing that things are better on the other side




Copyright © outlaw_mutiny ... [ 2005-12-13 17:51:35]
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Re: Final sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:01:17 PM AEST
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N ice poem i love the sunset part in this poem.. ^_^


Re: Final sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 06:00:59 AM AEST
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A briliant write but I certainly hope u don't check out any time real soon.
huggs,
emy


Re: Final sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by kisser89 on Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 09:09:01 PM AEST
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So good, it seemed to make so much sense, and im really glad we started talking




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