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Array ( [sid] => 11136 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Would You Still [time] => 2003-01-24 14:40:00 [hometext] => I wrote this poem to express to peope how little they know about me. I have created a fictional person for other's to see, and I often wonder if they would still love me if they knew the girl behind the mask. [bodytext] => Would you still think I was organized
If you knew I was obsessive compulsive
Would you still think I was confident
If you knew about my eating disorder
Would you still talk with me intellectually
If you knew about my lack of knowledge
Would you still think I was trustworthy
If you knew about the deception and lies
Would you still think I was happy
If you knew about the scars on my wrists
Would you still think I was determined
If you knew about my uncertainty
Would you still think I was independent
If you knew about my fear of loneliness
Would you still think I was patient
If you knew about my eagerness to die
Would you still deny me your love
If you knew what was in my heart
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Would You Still

Contributed by Fiona on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 02:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Would you still think I was organized
If you knew I was obsessive compulsive
Would you still think I was confident
If you knew about my eating disorder
Would you still talk with me intellectually
If you knew about my lack of knowledge
Would you still think I was trustworthy
If you knew about the deception and lies
Would you still think I was happy
If you knew about the scars on my wrists
Would you still think I was determined
If you knew about my uncertainty
Would you still think I was independent
If you knew about my fear of loneliness
Would you still think I was patient
If you knew about my eagerness to die
Would you still deny me your love
If you knew what was in my heart

Copyright © Fiona ... [ 2003-01-24 14:40:00]
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Re: Would You Still (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 05:40:24 PM AEST
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FIONA,YES I WOULD STILL TALK TO YOU IF YOU HAD ALL THIS!THIS WAS SUCH A TOUCHING PEICE,THE PAIN IS VERY CLEAR IN THESE WORDS. I HOPE YOU ARE GETTING HELP FOR THIS,GOD BLESS,CHRISTINA

Re: Would You Still (User Rating: 1 )
by Fiona on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 02:47:19 AM AEST
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Awwww thanks sweetie...My honesty shines through my poems, and I have a lot of things that I have to deal with but I will keep pushing onward! Luv ya, Fiona

Re: Would You Still (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 10:28:53 PM AEST
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big huggs kiddo

Re: Would You Still (User Rating: 1 )
by faffeee on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 07:53:38 AM AEST
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god you sound so troubled and its crazy that in this day and age people still have to hide all of these problems cos they're scared that they will be outcast. if we had a cold would people look at us differently? no. so why in society are mental problems so different? i hope that you find someone willing to support you through all these problems, im looking for someone who will do the same for me. its a tough fight and a tough search, but i like to believe there are people out there who will care. most of my poems are about exactly the same things as u have talked about here, dont worry you're not alone. xxx

Re: Would You Still (User Rating: 1 )
by perfection on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 06:18:08 PM AEST
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Wow Fiona! Thats really good! It explains how i feel also. Just know that even if you cant tell the people you love the most the truth about you, you can still find people who have the same problems as you. Much Love! xoxo

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