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Array ( [sid] => 111343 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Nightmare [time] => 2005-12-12 16:33:55 [hometext] => comments welcome [bodytext] => shadows looming
In the corner of my eye
a silhoute of a bird
flying in the night sky

my heart's beating fast
thumping away
as i look around
in disarray

i can't find my way out
of this nightmare
I'm trapped in this world
which's filled with dispair

i start to run
as fast as i can
like I've been doing
since this nightmare began

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 461 [topic] => 13 [informant] => xXxmegsxXx [notes] => Poem edited as requested in 'Site Help'. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

My Nightmare

Contributed by xXxmegsxXx on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:33:55 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

shadows looming
In the corner of my eye
a silhoute of a bird
flying in the night sky

my heart's beating fast
thumping away
as i look around
in disarray

i can't find my way out
of this nightmare
I'm trapped in this world
which's filled with dispair

i start to run
as fast as i can
like I've been doing
since this nightmare began

Copyright © xXxmegsxXx ... [ 2005-12-12 16:33:55]
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Re: My Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:48:24 PM AEST
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i really like the format you used to write this poem. very well composed and the rhyming adds a nice taste to it as well.

Re: My Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:52:26 PM AEST
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I have nightmares...really bad ones...I used to wake up with blood and tooth all over my pillow...I guess I'd clamp down so hard that I actually busted by back teeth...night terrors maybe....it stopped when I turned about twenty...the tooth thing...i still have the nightmares...
anyway, real horrorshow like poem here...very nice love it...
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Always, abraham

Re: My Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by cleoaurora on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:55:59 AM AEST
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great poem u have here... simple and amazing. love the rhyme and how it is composed. :)

Re: My Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by sararose1950 on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 12:43:21 PM AEST
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life can be a nightmare at times- just remember shadows cannot exsit without a light source.
Peace and Light

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