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this is my voice
no corporate signings
just carrying on like a mad man
trying to conceive my way on a blinded path
swallowed as much as i try trying to grasp the ledge
past haunting like a plaguing disease making me fall on my knees
stewardess pass holding cocktails of my dreams a awakening hangover
trying to blind and numb my way but to no sucess it creeps it hovers over me
dazed and confused
it is not a pretty word after all
bleeding am i
scared and alone
falling or grasping
i cant tell
visions of dread and the latest commercials
so grim a little dot
voice so silent in the stormy sea
it cant last
it cant
but it will

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grasping at you

Contributed by lostrelic on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:13:22 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

THIS
this is my voice
no corporate signings
just carrying on like a mad man
trying to conceive my way on a blinded path
swallowed as much as i try trying to grasp the ledge
past haunting like a plaguing disease making me fall on my knees
stewardess pass holding cocktails of my dreams a awakening hangover
trying to blind and numb my way but to no sucess it creeps it hovers over me
dazed and confused
it is not a pretty word after all
bleeding am i
scared and alone
falling or grasping
i cant tell
visions of dread and the latest commercials
so grim a little dot
voice so silent in the stormy sea
it cant last
it cant
but it will

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2005-12-12 16:13:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: grasping at you (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:57:15 PM AEST
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i get tired os seeing the typical poems on this page....something my grandma would write...or a fifteen yr old (sorry if that's your age ^_^)
it's refreshing to see writing when it strays from the typical, and attempts to find its own way. Very nice. Keep it up...or i'll hunt you down ^_^

always, abraham

Re: grasping at you (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 08:45:57 PM AEST
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Very diffrent, like the way that everything is just thrown. Almost looks like a christmas tree, too. But I really like just the fragments, poweful. Thanks for sharing.

Aq.

Re: grasping at you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 11:22:49 PM AEST
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Manificent writing as always.
One can feel the power of these words.
Huggs,
emy
Miss u

Re: grasping at you (User Rating: 1 )
by mychaos on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 02:15:57 AM AEST
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hey, i liked it for the most part, i can relate to a sense of despair....anyway, i like your phrasing throughout w/ maybe the exception of 1 or 2 words, but that doesnt matter. i think you might like my poem "iam the meadow" ide like for you to read it.

later

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