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(my existance)




Scorched earth


Spiritual death

Floating to a place where they do not speak

Neptune caught in translation


As I enter my way past mountains & caves


In darkness, on this throne we reign

There is a place where light has no shadow

Oh Mary...Come enter these chambers with me

In our darkest hours


I feel the crisp wind on my face

darkness...take me under

We swim till we cannot see

a blindness striking vibrantly

Alas we have come


Marking their hands

Under signs for which they stand


Mercury spinning out of place


Oh Mary...bow down with me

in this forever glow

The time has come to leave this land


once my home

She cries her bitter sweet tears


Shedding her warmth over my eyes

Reminding me of what I used to be

Darkness pull me up from here

Give me a reason to seek


These moments sink into me


I am my master


For my tongue has touched snow


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First Taste of Ice (My Existance)

Contributed by Blissfulviolet on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 01:59:17 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



First Taste of Ice

(my existance)




Scorched earth


Spiritual death

Floating to a place where they do not speak

Neptune caught in translation


As I enter my way past mountains & caves


In darkness, on this throne we reign

There is a place where light has no shadow

Oh Mary...Come enter these chambers with me

In our darkest hours


I feel the crisp wind on my face

darkness...take me under

We swim till we cannot see

a blindness striking vibrantly

Alas we have come


Marking their hands

Under signs for which they stand


Mercury spinning out of place


Oh Mary...bow down with me

in this forever glow

The time has come to leave this land


once my home

She cries her bitter sweet tears


Shedding her warmth over my eyes

Reminding me of what I used to be

Darkness pull me up from here

Give me a reason to seek


These moments sink into me


I am my master


For my tongue has touched snow






Copyright © Blissfulviolet ... [ 2005-12-12 01:59:17]
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Re: First Taste of Ice (My Existance) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:15:18 AM AEST
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Great write and awesomely thought provoking.
huggs,
emy
I'm tryin to rememba where I saw your graphics first.
is that German?


Re: First Taste of Ice (My Existance) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:32:41 PM AEST
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wow spectacular job. i'm jealous. lol. ^^


Re: First Taste of Ice (My Existance) (User Rating: 1 )
by heartquake on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 11:43:09 PM AEST
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that's a really good write, love the imagery, you did a great job describing it all




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