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I saw a rain of light, a reason to smile, that reason was him, the one that gave me hope and made me dream again, but I guess I have to pay for my past again. Since now my rain of light vanished and left me alone in the dark. How can I repair the damaged I caused. I don't know but my life is crumbling and I feel torned apart.

So many reasons to cry but I mustn't let it pull me apart because I have some hope left that maybe , maybe one day it will be alright. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 32 [informant] => biscochito [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

What did I do wrong now

Contributed by biscochito on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 11:45:56 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Every day I wake and I feel like I have to keep going, to regain what once I lost and now trying to get back. I was lost in the past and tried to find myself back to the ones that cared for me, but now the ones that I came for have turned this world into the one that I was lost for so long.

I saw a rain of light, a reason to smile, that reason was him, the one that gave me hope and made me dream again, but I guess I have to pay for my past again. Since now my rain of light vanished and left me alone in the dark. How can I repair the damaged I caused. I don't know but my life is crumbling and I feel torned apart.

So many reasons to cry but I mustn't let it pull me apart because I have some hope left that maybe , maybe one day it will be alright.

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Re: What did I do wrong now (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 12:22:56 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry 4 your loss.
I'm happy u chose our site here 'cause our webmaster is a gret person to provide this service 4 all.
huggs,
emy
pm me anytime,
emy

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