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I see fields unknown
But the snow is melted
The grass has grown

Flying through the rainbows
The colours are not all there
But I'll keep on flying
I'll find the missing somewhere

Flying over the river
The souls are cold and blue
Hoping I can bring out the sun
So a warmer river will run through

Always searching for some kind of truth
Not knowing if anyone has any proof
Seeing changes towards a time without war
And then the changes fall to the floor
Over the hills and far away I fly
Helping those I feel will cry
One more time I ask for an answer
But there is no question
Not yet

Running over the same ground
Trying to learn
Sometimes you feel right, other times wrong
Eventually, we all get a turn
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Not Yet

Contributed by Ari on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 10:46:18 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Flying through the hills
I see fields unknown
But the snow is melted
The grass has grown

Flying through the rainbows
The colours are not all there
But I'll keep on flying
I'll find the missing somewhere

Flying over the river
The souls are cold and blue
Hoping I can bring out the sun
So a warmer river will run through

Always searching for some kind of truth
Not knowing if anyone has any proof
Seeing changes towards a time without war
And then the changes fall to the floor
Over the hills and far away I fly
Helping those I feel will cry
One more time I ask for an answer
But there is no question
Not yet

Running over the same ground
Trying to learn
Sometimes you feel right, other times wrong
Eventually, we all get a turn

Copyright © Ari ... [ 2005-12-11 22:46:18]
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Re: Not Yet (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobsKK on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 10:59:40 PM AEST
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This one has very good imagery. :D Its a great write. Keep up the good work. I'll keep my eyes out for your poems :D - Luv KK

Re: Not Yet (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:40:21 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
Please keep it up.
huggs,
emy

Re: Not Yet (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Cowardly_Lion on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 07:09:08 AM AEST
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Excellent word painting. You dont even need an imagination to see it, all you need do is read. Loved it

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