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The warrior turns his head
And to his right he casts his stare
As he hovers in the air.

His eyes are clear,
His body is ready.
The sword he holds dear
Now points ahead, steady.

A mist has appeared
And in the opaque white,
His enemies have neared,
But this time he’ll stay to fight.

A blur of black and red,
As the warrior turns his head
And to darkness casts a last glance
As the sword begins to dance.
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The Middle

Contributed by Corruptor on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 12:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Draped in black and red
The warrior turns his head
And to his right he casts his stare
As he hovers in the air.

His eyes are clear,
His body is ready.
The sword he holds dear
Now points ahead, steady.

A mist has appeared
And in the opaque white,
His enemies have neared,
But this time he’ll stay to fight.

A blur of black and red,
As the warrior turns his head
And to darkness casts a last glance
As the sword begins to dance.

Copyright Â© Corruptor ... [ 2003-01-24 12:40:00]
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Re: The Middle (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 05:54:21 PM AEST
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tHIS WAS A REALLY GOOD FANTASY POEM,ALOT OF THOUGHT INTO THIS! CHRISTINA

Re: The Middle (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 05:53:19 PM AEST
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HI CORRUPTOR,
DO YOU WRITE LIKE THIS ALL THE TIME,KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITE.RICHARD CAMPBELL.

Re: The Middle (User Rating: 1 )
by Icequeen on Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 12:55:26 PM AEST
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Cool, i take it you read fantasy? Perhaps. Very Atmospheric.

Re: The Middle (User Rating: 1 )
by Corruptor on Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 01:34:56 AM AEST
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To tell you the truth, I'm not a big fan of fantasy. This poem was my attempt to describe a recuring dream I keep having. I'm glad you like the poem. :-)

Re: The Middle (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 01:01:11 PM AEST
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Hey Corruptor
when are you going to write "The End?"

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