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Array ( [sid] => 111210 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Own Blood [time] => 2005-12-09 22:33:10 [hometext] => comment please. [bodytext] => Look at the blood pouring forth from my wounds.
its my blood to bleed,
my blood you dont see.

Look at the cuts decorating my wrists.
the work of the razorblade,
which on my skin laid.

Look at the pain that you cannot see.
for i act like im strong,
or like nothing is wrong.

The blood just continues to pour,
gushing from my wrists.
so now i lay here on the floor,
in a pool of all of this.

And all because you did not listen,
when i told you to look.
and now its much to late,
my life i already took. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 718 [topic] => 72 [informant] => marie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

My Own Blood

Contributed by marie on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 10:33:10 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

Look at the blood pouring forth from my wounds.
its my blood to bleed,
my blood you dont see.

Look at the cuts decorating my wrists.
the work of the razorblade,
which on my skin laid.

Look at the pain that you cannot see.
for i act like im strong,
or like nothing is wrong.

The blood just continues to pour,
gushing from my wrists.
so now i lay here on the floor,
in a pool of all of this.

And all because you did not listen,
when i told you to look.
and now its much to late,
my life i already took.

Copyright © marie ... [ 2005-12-09 22:33:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Own Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 10:36:38 PM AEST
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nice poem

Re: My Own Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by His_Infernal_Majesty on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 09:43:56 AM AEST
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pretty good =)

Re: My Own Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_chadow on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 02:03:51 PM AEST
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Good thing you're still here.

Re: My Own Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by lilblkcat on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 10:15:04 PM AEST
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its a very good poem.. it definantely touched me. thank you for sharing it.

Re: My Own Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by thisismesodeal on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:50:30 PM AEST
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Good poem. Flows well. Very discrpitive.

Re: My Own Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by humboldtsweetie33 on Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 02:52:39 AM AEST
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great job i love how it flows soo well...kinda triggerring you might wanna put a warning but still very very nice i love it

Re: My Own Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Sparda on Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 12:27:44 PM AEST
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Heyas, not bad, pretty deep, I can see how you must feel at times..
It takes a certain type of mentality to compose such poems, so I can see that you are probably feeling pretty down...
Remember, there are atleast 2 people in this world that love you, that you dont even know exist, and there is atlest 1 person that loves you so much that they would give up their life, so that you could live..
remind youself whenever you need some reasurrance, you are special, and you gotta beleive that you arent made of glass.
You are stronger than that.
Anyways, Take care of yourself, and write if it makes you feel better.
If u need someone to talk to, as im sure most of the people here would offer, u can add me to msn, if u have it.
Haydnmantell@spikyfish.fsnet.co.uk
-Sparda-

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