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Array ( [sid] => 111199 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Last Word . . . [time] => 2005-12-09 17:44:34 [hometext] => I wanted to write a happy poem but my hand wont let me...it just wrote how i really felt inside. its a very strange emotion...enjoy (or not) the poem please tell me what you think thanks! to someone very special that doesnt really know whats going on [bodytext] => I have done too much wrong
Too much pain has been caused
It is time to give up
And throw it all away
As I sit here in the corner
Wishing things were different
All i can think of is how i have let you down
So many times I have wanted to do this
But never got a chance
Maybe it will finally be over
Peace will come at last
So as i have to say my last words now
I love you so much and Goodbye . . .

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Last Word . . .

Contributed by JenJen on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 05:44:34 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I have done too much wrong
Too much pain has been caused
It is time to give up
And throw it all away
As I sit here in the corner
Wishing things were different
All i can think of is how i have let you down
So many times I have wanted to do this
But never got a chance
Maybe it will finally be over
Peace will come at last
So as i have to say my last words now
I love you so much and Goodbye . . .

Copyright © JenJen ... [ 2005-12-09 17:44:34]
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Re: Last Word . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Lin54 on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:14:31 PM AEST
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Your words are of regret and being trapped without any possible way out except death. I've wondered about that myself when things never seem to go right--but there is no peace except running to the One who created us and crawling in His lap and just cry it out!

I can feel your despair!

Lin54

Re: Last Word . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:44:38 PM AEST
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nice

Re: Last Word . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:45:05 PM AEST
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A beautiful and heartwrenching poem. Very emotional. My blessings with you. Just remeber that the lotus flower blooms in the mud.

Re: Last Word . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 10:29:34 PM AEST
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well as for writing a happy poem. i have the same problem and ive come to face that if you write of an inauthentic feeling it will only express itself in a poem....and thats trash. and as for the poem, not a strange emotion. not a very novel poem either. this is a very typical poem for this category, and i think even if your hand wont let you write happiness you can let your true talent come through in your poem.

Re: Last Word . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 04:26:58 PM AEST
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well unlike some people, i like this poem alot. i feel the same way all the time.

Re: Last Word . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 04:46:49 AM AEST
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self pity is of no use to you, tho i myself am a big fan of wallowing in it, try to get back up and go for round two.
as for the poem, its short, sweet and to the point, loved it.

SM

Re: Last Word . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by kittie30 on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 11:23:42 AM AEST
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very well written, keep up writing ur work is great and it helps with emotions

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