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Array ( [sid] => 111188 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => These Hatin' Eyes [time] => 2005-12-09 13:50:28 [hometext] => Because nice guys get tired. [bodytext] => Smiles hide
But I can't disguise
my hatin' eyes
sneers deride
and I let them slide
but my eyes don't lie
I harbor hatred on the sly
no, i don't cry
but even tears can bely
a viciousness untried
these irises hold a passion demonized
it's as if, sometimes
I need to exorcise these hatin' eyes
anyway, I should excercise these failin' eyes
because these glasses will drive me blind
I lay in wait behind
these pupils of mine
holding a darkness inside
that I have yet to decide
should be freed or chastised
yet I don't let anyone get wise
to the conflict happening under their noses
I'm posin'
as a nice guy
but that was always just a guise
for these hatin' eyes [comments] => 2 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 6 [informant] => lost_chadow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

These Hatin' Eyes

Contributed by lost_chadow on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 01:50:28 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Smiles hide
But I can't disguise
my hatin' eyes
sneers deride
and I let them slide
but my eyes don't lie
I harbor hatred on the sly
no, i don't cry
but even tears can bely
a viciousness untried
these irises hold a passion demonized
it's as if, sometimes
I need to exorcise these hatin' eyes
anyway, I should excercise these failin' eyes
because these glasses will drive me blind
I lay in wait behind
these pupils of mine
holding a darkness inside
that I have yet to decide
should be freed or chastised
yet I don't let anyone get wise
to the conflict happening under their noses
I'm posin'
as a nice guy
but that was always just a guise
for these hatin' eyes

Copyright © lost_chadow ... [ 2005-12-09 13:50:28]
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Re: These Hatin' Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthy on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 02:23:01 PM AEST
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i really like it, keep in touch, Ruthyxx

Re: These Hatin' Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 08:10:53 AM AEST
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a great write.. your poem speeks in many different volumes.. keep up the great work and i hope to read more of your work.. best wishes.
~Justin L.~

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