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Array ( [sid] => 111183 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Escape from… [time] => 2005-12-09 11:20:26 [hometext] => Who can understand let me know. Then God will show [bodytext] => To deep for the mind to alleviate the confusion of illusion
Everything that shines isn’t equivalent to the brightness of the sun
Perhaps your son perceives a false impression about life
and what it means to be bright
While his views are constantly an illusion that it’s cool to deceive,
Life is definitely not fake no matter how false you are while living
Life doesn’t rewind itself because you decide to stop sinning
What you portray while living is what you & the world holds onto
Only those who’s not lured into confusion & illusion would see past the delusion
and recognize a righteous path leading to a door
Not an exit
Just a place to replace what’s not beautiful but even there deception can creep upon you.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 48 [informant] => kamal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Escape from…

Contributed by kamal on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 11:20:26 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

To deep for the mind to alleviate the confusion of illusion
Everything that shines isn’t equivalent to the brightness of the sun
Perhaps your son perceives a false impression about life
and what it means to be bright
While his views are constantly an illusion that it’s cool to deceive,
Life is definitely not fake no matter how false you are while living
Life doesn’t rewind itself because you decide to stop sinning
What you portray while living is what you & the world holds onto
Only those who’s not lured into confusion & illusion would see past the delusion
and recognize a righteous path leading to a door
Not an exit
Just a place to replace what’s not beautiful but even there deception can creep upon you.

Copyright Â© kamal ... [ 2005-12-09 11:20:26]
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Re: Escape from… (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 07:23:01 PM AEST
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wow. this is worded so well. deep expression is cut into the words, i really enjoyed reading this, keep up the good work.
-trini

Re: Escape from… (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 08:29:02 AM AEST
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Seek and you shall find
Kock and the door will be open
Life is to be lived
You cannot escape it
Yes deception is everywhere
Another great poem you offer here

Sinned

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