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Array ( [sid] => 111177 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fade. [time] => 2005-12-09 09:44:15 [hometext] => Don't Ask. I have no idea. [bodytext] => Cloaked
In tainted grains of rust
My Angel, Why have thou forgotten?
Me, I was the only.
The beauty.
The lover, the creator, the holder of ones soul.
Turned down
Trod, into the worst
The user
The Abuser
The Addict and the unworth.
Even though, untrue.
They believed You.
Now, with cold playing at my fingertips.
Frost eating away the nails.
You have become my existance
My Anger and Console.
My Capture, my Endeavor.
My Paradise, one and forever.
But am I your only?
Your reasno for loving, the only existance worth?
Of this, I may prove unworthy.
But not, so low as to deprive myself of life.
Of Hope.
Of one Reason fading to another.
Of these faces, of those places.
Of the names I so recite.
You can drag me into oblivion.
Take me in your arms.
Cast me into pain, regret.
My Dignity, lost so yet.
But even with this moment
A moment, it shall stay.
Forever is unslain.
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Fade.

Contributed by Faded-Whisper on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 09:44:15 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Cloaked
In tainted grains of rust
My Angel, Why have thou forgotten?
Me, I was the only.
The beauty.
The lover, the creator, the holder of ones soul.
Turned down
Trod, into the worst
The user
The Abuser
The Addict and the unworth.
Even though, untrue.
They believed You.
Now, with cold playing at my fingertips.
Frost eating away the nails.
You have become my existance
My Anger and Console.
My Capture, my Endeavor.
My Paradise, one and forever.
But am I your only?
Your reasno for loving, the only existance worth?
Of this, I may prove unworthy.
But not, so low as to deprive myself of life.
Of Hope.
Of one Reason fading to another.
Of these faces, of those places.
Of the names I so recite.
You can drag me into oblivion.
Take me in your arms.
Cast me into pain, regret.
My Dignity, lost so yet.
But even with this moment
A moment, it shall stay.
Forever is unslain.

Copyright © Faded-Whisper ... [ 2005-12-09 09:44:15]
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Re: Fade. (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 10:42:47 AM AEST
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well woteva it's about, it's expressed v well :-)

Re: Fade. (User Rating: 1 )
by pooja on Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 08:02:09 AM AEST
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Extremely rich and vivid poem. Loved ur expressions
"Forever is unslain" . Very well-written.

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