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poetry book 2 by emystar PAGE 1

2/O1/05

You felt so bad 'bout what you'd done
Please don't worry
Feel jus like a kid.
Floatin on air, yeah, I did.

Darlin I 4 give your heartsounds
The pain didn't hang 'round.
Flotin, yeah, that's what i say, Hey!
Them pains jus flew away.

I'm so high on luv, hey!
Feels like Christmas day
You freed me from my prison
and this only beginning.

Now this girl surely understands
what luv is now, Oh man.
Can we jus fly 2 getta
luvn all kindssa wettha?

You must have died daily
Knowing
since u called me lady,
that luv would always live!
Wonna luv ya do u vibe?

by
Emy Star

Copyright © Emy Star

Inspiration: 2/01/05

SultryRose's Signatures

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DARLIN I FORGIVE U

Contributed by emystar on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 04:58:45 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

TARZAN'S-N-JANES HEARTSOUNDS

poetry book 2 by emystar PAGE 1

2/O1/05

You felt so bad 'bout what you'd done
Please don't worry
Feel jus like a kid.
Floatin on air, yeah, I did.

Darlin I 4 give your heartsounds
The pain didn't hang 'round.
Flotin, yeah, that's what i say, Hey!
Them pains jus flew away.

I'm so high on luv, hey!
Feels like Christmas day
You freed me from my prison
and this only beginning.

Now this girl surely understands
what luv is now, Oh man.
Can we jus fly 2 getta
luvn all kindssa wettha?

You must have died daily
Knowing
since u called me lady,
that luv would always live!
Wonna luv ya do u vibe?

by
Emy Star

Copyright © Emy Star

Inspiration: 2/01/05

SultryRose's Signatures

Copyright Â© emystar ... [ 2005-12-09 04:58:45]
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Re: DARLIN I FORGIVE U (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 05:16:10 AM AEST
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I totally love this EmyStar. It's well worth the read. Wonderfully penned as always.

I'm so high on luv, hey!
Feels like Christmas day
You freed me from my prison
and this only beginning.

Absolutely awesome. You rock girl!
Loves ya,
~sue~

Re: DARLIN I FORGIVE U (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 03:02:23 PM AEST
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nice song lyrics emy or as a poem either way

Ben

Re: DARLIN I FORGIVE U (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 03:07:05 PM AEST
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Well, I read them backwards, but I still enjoyed them. Where do you get your perky from, I'd like to order some. lol
Thumps ;o)

Re: DARLIN I FORGIVE U (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 01:05:18 PM AEST
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Well, well...someone's found themself some love here, now haven't ya? Lucky lady, enjoy! Good song here expressing your feelings. I like it : )

Scorp.

Re: DARLIN I FORGIVE U (User Rating: 1 )
by robertdavidson on Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 10:53:49 PM AEST
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EMYSTAR

You have some excellent song lyrics here. Perhaps your second verse could serve as a repeating chorus. I enjoyed the language although I'm not certain if you are using a local accent here.

Robert Davidson.

http://www.robertdavidson.blogsource.com

Re: DARLIN I FORGIVE U (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 05:20:48 AM AEST
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well done , well written, a joy to read as always.

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