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Array ( [sid] => 111160 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Four Walls [time] => 2005-12-08 22:22:46 [hometext] => this is a poem i wrote while incarcerated please comment [bodytext] => FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME like a squirels nest
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME making heaviness of my chest
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME i never get ant rest
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME concrete is all i can see
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME how can this be
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME i've never been so nervous
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME do i realy deserve this
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME am i in jail or am i in hell
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME what in the world is this all about
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME screw this i'm breaking out
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME i deserve to be free
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME that woman shoulda left me be [comments] => 1 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 65 [informant] => CaseyRedman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Four Walls

Contributed by CaseyRedman on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 10:22:46 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME like a squirels nest
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME making heaviness of my chest
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME i never get ant rest
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME concrete is all i can see
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME how can this be
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME i've never been so nervous
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME do i realy deserve this
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME am i in jail or am i in hell
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME what in the world is this all about
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME screw this i'm breaking out
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME i deserve to be free
FOUR WALLS SURROUND ME that woman shoulda left me be

Copyright © CaseyRedman ... [ 2005-12-08 22:22:46]
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Re: Four Walls (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 10:33:36 PM AEST
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well I spent 7 hours in jail once over a misundertand of the school laws-n-confussion.
don't wonna eva go there again but there was a women that had been in the jail from overflow in her town. the phones don't dial long distence, her husband was there too but the last words' to me was I helped here and I said if it helped u then it's worth it. I contacted her daughter 4 her.
We lost touch but that was my greates fear being all at the mercy of humans.
A great write!
huggs,
emy

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