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And i'm all alone without a friend
All alone in this creepy house
Nothing sturring not even a mouse
Santa wont be visiting, not this year
This hell is no place for his reindear
And this is no time for gifts of gold
Cause it can't replace the soul i've sold
I sold it to satin with no return
So now when i'm dead i'll forever burn
So santa if you see God on any given night
Please ask him to show me his light
Tell him i'm sorry for my wicked ways
And i'll honor his name for the rest of my days
I'll honor his name if i can be forgiven
And i'll change this sinfull life i've been livin

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santa can you save my soul

Contributed by outlaw_mutiny on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 09:24:26 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

It's christmas time once agian
And i'm all alone without a friend
All alone in this creepy house
Nothing sturring not even a mouse
Santa wont be visiting, not this year
This hell is no place for his reindear
And this is no time for gifts of gold
Cause it can't replace the soul i've sold
I sold it to satin with no return
So now when i'm dead i'll forever burn
So santa if you see God on any given night
Please ask him to show me his light
Tell him i'm sorry for my wicked ways
And i'll honor his name for the rest of my days
I'll honor his name if i can be forgiven
And i'll change this sinfull life i've been livin

P

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Re: santa can you save my soul (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 09:38:57 PM AEST
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wow such a touching write. a very dear person from my past told me he sold is soul to get out of a town where he did very wrong.
Thru my prayer, my children, his son we fought the demons that satan had fanned him etc.
See our souls were nerver really ours 'cause at the cross he gave us luv, mercey, grace, joy, peace, luv, strength of our milliom.biloins of sin were set us all free from satan's lies.
See Jessus got's him on a leash and he has to bow down at the same cross we kneel down at,
Anyway jus except that u r tottaled sealed in the arms of God and all he wants is for u to 4 know he luvs u eternal, be yourself jus trust God in Jesus name, Amen! Amen means it is done in Jesus name!
Then it's sighned sealed-n-delivered in Jesus name,
amen!
jus me,
emy

Re: santa can you save my soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 10:08:55 PM AEST
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A touching heartfelt write.May God hear ur plea and answer ur wish. Your working is absolutely awesome. Keep penning.
*hugs*
~sue~

Re: santa can you save my soul (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 07:03:57 PM AEST
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God is a forgiving God...
But is a very good poem..
Very good indeed..
God Bless again..Smile..

Re: santa can you save my soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 06:04:22 PM AEST
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I used to pray to Santa, found out later why my gift I prayed for always came to me. The Santa I prayed to, however has no red suit, sleigh or reindeer. I am sure your Santa heard you too. He is very jolly, and who really knows how to answer your prayer.

Your Santa has seen God, and God has heard you. Nice gift to ask for... God and Santa, two, very well known around the world. Its no surprise you wrote this poem in the way it is, and it is very well written. Merry Christmas, Happy New Year and Blessings to you and yours.

And i'll honor his name for the rest of my days
I'll honor his name if i can be forgiven
And i'll change this sinfull life i've been livin

You asked, you shall receive, God forgives all, loves all who loves and knows Him. Change it up, and you will very much be changed. Ho! Ho! Ho! Amen! Amen! Amen! Raquel Leah :D

Re: santa can you save my soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 10:06:01 PM AEST
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WOw such a touching write!! I really love

reading your poems they are all great..

keep writing you do a great job!!^_^

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