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Array ( [sid] => 111115 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => High Sensativity [time] => 2005-12-07 20:44:25 [hometext] => I am highly sensative to these pills that are wreaking me.... A battle that is not even being fought! [bodytext] => --------________---------------

A star in the sky
A poem to the dead
A tear in the ground
Brings this crystal to your eye

I feel like I'm old
I feel like I'm invalid
I feel like I'm sick
In a casket so close the lid

I feel like I'm done
I feel like it's over now
I feel but I'm numb
Curtain falls while I take a bow and now

Substance races through my veins
Angels try to soothe my pain
High sensitivity
Wake up with my head still aching
I'm drugged from all the pills I'm taking

I don't know my name
I don't know if I can make it
I don't feel the same
My love is dead and I cannot wake it
I don't wanna run
I don't have a place to run to
I don't see the sun
I don't understand what I must do

Substance races through my veins
Angels try to soothe my pain
I laugh, my self respect is flaking
I hate all the mistakes I'm making

My money's running out
My shoes are wearing thin
Each day I break my back
To end where I begin
A razor full of blood is dragged across the sky
But I don't think I really want to die

I'm still afraid of ghosts that can see me
They know my thoughts, they read my mind
Beside myself I judge my condition
I close my eyes but can't go blind

I'm feeling all the heat, all the chaos
It's gotten underneath my skin
So far to go to reach absolution
My sanity, my soul runs thin

I fell in love, I made that decision
On broken hearts I cut myself
Despite the pain I maintain my position
And leave good will up on the shelf

But now I'm stuck... a chain with no linkage
A vagrant lover prisoner
Suspicious goals distort good intentions
Aggressive action batterer

Substance races through my veins
Angels try to soothe my pain
I laugh, my self respect is flaking
I hate all the mistakes I'm making
High sensitivity [comments] => 3 [counter] => 532 [topic] => 66 [informant] => MajesticPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 29 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )
High Sensativity

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:44:25 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



--------________---------------

A star in the sky
A poem to the dead
A tear in the ground
Brings this crystal to your eye

I feel like I'm old
I feel like I'm invalid
I feel like I'm sick
In a casket so close the lid

I feel like I'm done
I feel like it's over now
I feel but I'm numb
Curtain falls while I take a bow and now

Substance races through my veins
Angels try to soothe my pain
High sensitivity
Wake up with my head still aching
I'm drugged from all the pills I'm taking

I don't know my name
I don't know if I can make it
I don't feel the same
My love is dead and I cannot wake it
I don't wanna run
I don't have a place to run to
I don't see the sun
I don't understand what I must do

Substance races through my veins
Angels try to soothe my pain
I laugh, my self respect is flaking
I hate all the mistakes I'm making

My money's running out
My shoes are wearing thin
Each day I break my back
To end where I begin
A razor full of blood is dragged across the sky
But I don't think I really want to die

I'm still afraid of ghosts that can see me
They know my thoughts, they read my mind
Beside myself I judge my condition
I close my eyes but can't go blind

I'm feeling all the heat, all the chaos
It's gotten underneath my skin
So far to go to reach absolution
My sanity, my soul runs thin

I fell in love, I made that decision
On broken hearts I cut myself
Despite the pain I maintain my position
And leave good will up on the shelf

But now I'm stuck... a chain with no linkage
A vagrant lover prisoner
Suspicious goals distort good intentions
Aggressive action batterer

Substance races through my veins
Angels try to soothe my pain
I laugh, my self respect is flaking
I hate all the mistakes I'm making
High sensitivity




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Re: High Sensativity (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 09:22:44 PM AEST
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Amazing. I don't know if I can say anything besides that. This is one of
my favorite poems instantly... my brain is clogged and befuddled and
I can see that. An overall great job.

~Kara~~Waos~


Re: High Sensativity (User Rating: 1 )
by jessejames on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 10:15:01 PM AEST
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awsome write


Re: High Sensativity (User Rating: 1 )
by slogan on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 12:01:24 AM AEST
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I really like this poem.. good job..jh




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