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imaged from insanity trusting thoughts of man

glorified there vision true technology they deceive
thinking life with out a view of the toys we need

concrete walls our vision falls in this we do protray
living life in hollow thoughts our actions we display

field of trees all living free roots in solid ground
and our species on a killing spree spreading chaos around

bodys filled with toxins high from the air we breath
now think as your condos built uprooting all those trees

sex like cash we spend so fast in fashions that we wear
permissive soul with out a goal wondering with out a care

money green mans true set dream in god we faithfully trust
if this means forget your soul i hope your pedastal rusts

kindness quiet to shy for help shes probaly high on drugs
a woman cold out in the fold hiding her body from the thugs

a child cry her father dies a victum of the night
trying to live in a racist world they didnt have the right

money drugs and hollywood a glimer in your eye
escaping with television oprea is your high

you think your free but all i see is a cage that surrounds
broken thoughts that never forgot in this you seem to drown

hatred mad like shardes of glass bleeding in your heart
pumping true of anger blue you lost right from the start

drivin light of dawns dead light a glimpse of pasts decay
showing lost relics gleam tarnishing away

monkey man and one celled blob thrown with no glimpse of thought
they truly want you to forget and wonder with the lost

why must i see and think these things each and everyday
i really just want to die and slowly fade away


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hollow regreat

Contributed by lostrelic on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:27:01 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



sharpened blades and steel glaives just castles in the sand
imaged from insanity trusting thoughts of man

glorified there vision true technology they deceive
thinking life with out a view of the toys we need

concrete walls our vision falls in this we do protray
living life in hollow thoughts our actions we display

field of trees all living free roots in solid ground
and our species on a killing spree spreading chaos around

bodys filled with toxins high from the air we breath
now think as your condos built uprooting all those trees

sex like cash we spend so fast in fashions that we wear
permissive soul with out a goal wondering with out a care

money green mans true set dream in god we faithfully trust
if this means forget your soul i hope your pedastal rusts

kindness quiet to shy for help shes probaly high on drugs
a woman cold out in the fold hiding her body from the thugs

a child cry her father dies a victum of the night
trying to live in a racist world they didnt have the right

money drugs and hollywood a glimer in your eye
escaping with television oprea is your high

you think your free but all i see is a cage that surrounds
broken thoughts that never forgot in this you seem to drown

hatred mad like shardes of glass bleeding in your heart
pumping true of anger blue you lost right from the start

drivin light of dawns dead light a glimpse of pasts decay
showing lost relics gleam tarnishing away

monkey man and one celled blob thrown with no glimpse of thought
they truly want you to forget and wonder with the lost

why must i see and think these things each and everyday
i really just want to die and slowly fade away






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Re: hollow regreat (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 03:06:18 PM AEST
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wow. This is very good. I like it alot. Great work!


Re: hollow regreat (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 03:25:47 PM AEST
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Reagan I really like your style of writing. Very well penned and alot truth between the lines.
Thanks so much for sharing ur great poetry with us. Enjoyable as always.
*hugs*
~sue~


Re: hollow regreat (User Rating: 1 )
by AllSmiles on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 04:02:36 PM AEST
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That's very well written. I really like it. Nice Work!


Re: hollow regreat (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 04:48:45 PM AEST
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Really good read, so many truths, so much anger, well expressed :-)


Re: hollow regreat (User Rating: 1 )
by SkC_cutie on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 02:20:06 PM AEST
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OMG i like your poem. Great word choice and imagery. I think that you have a great talent, i look forward to seeing more of your poetry!
--Shaunette


Re: hollow regreat (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 08:01:04 AM AEST
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I'm sorta speechless.. so all i have to say is wow.. i loved it.. truly a great write> thank you for sharing your work.. keep up the great work and look forward for more.. best of wishes to you and god bless.
~Justin L.~




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