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Array ( [sid] => 111074 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Pain will Always stay [time] => 2005-12-07 02:09:02 [hometext] => Some people wouldnt understand what I mean... but then again people tend to never get what I mean. [bodytext] => The Pain will Always Stay

I cut myself deeper
and now it grows
the pain inside
watch it flow.
it used to be silent
but now it screams
watch my cuts
as the seep.

couldnt you see me
a sad little girl
alone and crying
in her dark world.
Now I'm older
not much has changed
youd thought Id find happiness
but its all the same.

Still tormented
that ugly child
the looks I got
have fallowed me now
Dont call me names
it helps you not
just look what youve done
to me today
the pain youve created
will always.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Shattered_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

The Pain will Always stay

Contributed by Shattered_soul on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:09:02 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The Pain will Always Stay

I cut myself deeper
and now it grows
the pain inside
watch it flow.
it used to be silent
but now it screams
watch my cuts
as the seep.

couldnt you see me
a sad little girl
alone and crying
in her dark world.
Now I'm older
not much has changed
youd thought Id find happiness
but its all the same.

Still tormented
that ugly child
the looks I got
have fallowed me now
Dont call me names
it helps you not
just look what youve done
to me today
the pain youve created
will always.

Copyright © Shattered_soul ... [ 2005-12-07 02:09:02]
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Re: The Pain will Always stay (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 04:22:11 AM AEST
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such an awesome writer here.
Your pen name would have once been me.
Course i've been shattered but my pain had no power once I let go-n-let God.
the ones that don't get it should ask. I don't need to ask 'cause been down the road u travled but the power is the pen but I'm sure u know this.
luv, big huggs, peace, joy, luv to yourself,
emy
Pm me any time.

Re: The Pain will Always stay (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:36:59 AM AEST
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bitter torment well shown

Re: The Pain will Always stay (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:53:44 AM AEST
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Goinging out on a limb here-
Often others tend to reject and fear that which they find hidden deep within themselves-
Not being seen by others can sometimes be a blessing in disguise-
As for being ugly-outer looks are just that-
The real bueaty is deep inside and some people lack that so they fear it-
Always be yourself and others will see you as you see yourself...
Joe

Re: The Pain will Always stay (User Rating: 1 )
by STECKS on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:46:32 PM AEST
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Well written, can also indentify with this poem.

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