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Array ( [sid] => 111053 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In The Ashes [time] => 2005-12-06 19:39:40 [hometext] => ~the irony of sickness. some diseases are enflicted by an outside source, some reside within us until others force them out. But my sickness was chosen hand picked by me, I bask in its power I love this disease.I am what i've made me~ [bodytext] => bones snap
collapse
wrists tired of penance
what is forgiveness?

alive in the ashes
dead in the remorse
the wake of eternity
the settling of scores

you taught me to hurt
now beg for me to heal
ignore the pain
your lies won't yeild

ignorant bastards
i am what you made me
look inside the creation
to the hatred you gave me

tired wrists
bled out from penance
you've changed
repented
why the hell would you want
my forgiveness???

i am what you gave me
the hatred you made me
the sick little girl
sour and angry

these wrists are dead
bones have snapped
i've relapsed
i'll push it away
the meal tray
give it back

i am what i've made me
grew on hatred as a baby
morphed to the sick little girl
sour and angry

forgiveness?
i'll push it away

alive in the ashes
dead in the remorse
the wake of eternity
the settling of scores

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In The Ashes

Contributed by weepingprophet on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 07:39:40 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



bones snap
collapse
wrists tired of penance
what is forgiveness?

alive in the ashes
dead in the remorse
the wake of eternity
the settling of scores

you taught me to hurt
now beg for me to heal
ignore the pain
your lies won't yeild

ignorant bastards
i am what you made me
look inside the creation
to the hatred you gave me

tired wrists
bled out from penance
you've changed
repented
why the hell would you want
my forgiveness???

i am what you gave me
the hatred you made me
the sick little girl
sour and angry

these wrists are dead
bones have snapped
i've relapsed
i'll push it away
the meal tray
give it back

i am what i've made me
grew on hatred as a baby
morphed to the sick little girl
sour and angry

forgiveness?
i'll push it away

alive in the ashes
dead in the remorse
the wake of eternity
the settling of scores





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Re: In The Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 08:19:54 PM AEST
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Amazing write, I tend to enjoy all of your posts though. Very angry, almost needy, calling out for help it seems aswell. I loved it, they always seems to flow and connect. Great write.

-Cassy


Re: In The Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 01:06:44 AM AEST
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brilliant, i love the opening lines

[bones snap
collapse
wrists tired of penance
what is forgiveness?]

you should read mine: 'Starving to Survive'

x x


Re: In The Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 10:45:53 AM AEST
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Very sad but greatly written as always.
huggs,
emy




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