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Array ( [sid] => 11103 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Turmoil [time] => 2003-01-24 04:20:00 [hometext] => TURMOIL. very repetitive.... probably a tough read. for that reason its more up here for me than for you all, though i would appreciate reads...
quotes Lord of the Rings, and songs by the Eels, Janet Jackson, Matchbox Twenty, and Moby.... simply because i would want the moods of those songs and phrases as quoted to be the mood in the poem...... i admit its odd but hopefully the poem wont get abused here... [bodytext] => Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words.

Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind.

Next time, throw yourself in and rid us your stupidity. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words.

No, Sam. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words.

I never meant to hurt you. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words.

Are you listening? Can you hear me? Have you forgotten? Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words.

I will hold you close while I am slowly dying inside. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words.

Would you hate me if I fell? Actions speak louder than words.

I would give you anything. Actions speak louder than words.

I know what your actions make me feel like. Actions speak louder than words.

What have you done for me lately? Actions speak louder than words.

Am I needy like they said? Actions speak louder than words.

I know not what feeling those words should give me. Actions speak louder than words.

Do you notice how much I give you? Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind.

You have seen the last of my sorrow. Out of sight, out of mind.

I will heal on my own. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 13 [informant] => AzurePaladin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Turmoil

Contributed by AzurePaladin on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 04:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words.

Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind.

Next time, throw yourself in and rid us your stupidity. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words.

No, Sam. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words.

I never meant to hurt you. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words.

Are you listening? Can you hear me? Have you forgotten? Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words.

I will hold you close while I am slowly dying inside. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words.

Would you hate me if I fell? Actions speak louder than words.

I would give you anything. Actions speak louder than words.

I know what your actions make me feel like. Actions speak louder than words.

What have you done for me lately? Actions speak louder than words.

Am I needy like they said? Actions speak louder than words.

I know not what feeling those words should give me. Actions speak louder than words.

Do you notice how much I give you? Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind. Out of sight, out of mind.

You have seen the last of my sorrow. Out of sight, out of mind.

I will heal on my own.

Copyright © AzurePaladin ... [ 2003-01-24 04:20:00]
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Re: Turmoil (User Rating: 1 )
by Dani on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 07:38:45 AM AEST
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Interesting, reads like the inside of someone's thoughts, you know, when you just can't get something out of your head?
I especially like the last couple lines :)

Re: Turmoil (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 05:31:22 PM AEST
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Unique... i was confused because I thought I was reading Turmoil and thought this one should be called 'Actions speak louder than words' oh well.

BObo (Joel)

Re: Turmoil (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 02:35:58 AM AEST
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loved this, feels like your brain is gonna pop any moment, really interesting style, well done

Re: Turmoil (User Rating: 1 )
by Ethereal_Engine on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:20:19 AM AEST
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I liked this one more then most, although it's still heavier then what I normally read. Excellent title, Turmoil, Chaos, Confusion, Madness, almost lunicy with the number of repetitions. With most poems I read by you I am reminded of something. "I will hold you close while I am slowly dying inside" makes me think of a song by Gross National Produkt called Dying inside pt 1 that I kept mistaking for a song by Death Boy lol. When I went to play it after I read that line I was surprised that it was GNP becaue the lyrics are so catchy. As you might remember...but probally not....GNP makes industrial electronica music. The heaviness of the song matches the heaviness of the poem. I didnt recognize any of the song lyrics ;_;, but i like how you used Lord of the Rings quotes ^_^. I hope you can acheive lightness in your poems if it only be once. Glad you liked World of Pink I had fun writing it.

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