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Array ( [sid] => 111009 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Choices [time] => 2005-12-06 01:18:37 [hometext] => To comment, or not to comment.....The choice is yours..... [bodytext] => You walked into my life,
and then you ran away.
You left me in the dark,
in the middle of the day.

Now, you are silent.
You said so much to me.
Then you built a wall.
What does it all mean?

My ego torn in tatters.
My mind is blown away.
Feeling like the living dead,
I'm lost for words to say.

So confusing are your games,
I do not want to play.
It's my choice to decide.
I have to have my say.

I'm not sure what I want to do.
But I know I don't want this pain.
I don't need to suffer.
Don't need to feel ashamed.

I can change my life.
It is my life to change.
If I don't want you in my life,
would you feel the pain?

But that doesn't matter.
I don't need you to exist.
If I don't want you in my life,
your presence won't be missed.

This is my choice.
This is my decision.
I have my own dream.
I have my own vision.
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Choices

Contributed by OzChick on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:18:37 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You walked into my life,
and then you ran away.
You left me in the dark,
in the middle of the day.

Now, you are silent.
You said so much to me.
Then you built a wall.
What does it all mean?

My ego torn in tatters.
My mind is blown away.
Feeling like the living dead,
I'm lost for words to say.

So confusing are your games,
I do not want to play.
It's my choice to decide.
I have to have my say.

I'm not sure what I want to do.
But I know I don't want this pain.
I don't need to suffer.
Don't need to feel ashamed.

I can change my life.
It is my life to change.
If I don't want you in my life,
would you feel the pain?

But that doesn't matter.
I don't need you to exist.
If I don't want you in my life,
your presence won't be missed.

This is my choice.
This is my decision.
I have my own dream.
I have my own vision.

Copyright © OzChick ... [ 2005-12-06 01:18:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Choices (User Rating: 1 )
by Shnannon on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:23:34 AM AEST
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Wow this is really really good.
I especially love the part
"You left me in the dark,
in the middle of the day"
It's such a crazy thought...I love it!

Keep up the good work!

Re: Choices (User Rating: 1 )
by tiggytom on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 07:55:00 AM AEST
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Great stuff, a poem of self-realisation

keep it up :)

Tom

Re: Choices (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:39:18 PM AEST
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Good write. Your sound positive and powerful. I think you will do well with your dreams and visions. Peace to you, Laura

Re: Choices (User Rating: 1 )
by slogan on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:18:35 PM AEST
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great poem....jh

Re: Choices (User Rating: 1 )
by LOSTtrust on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 01:00:38 AM AEST
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wow!thats a good poem,keep on wrighting!you really made me think about stuff i try to hide,great poem,good luck with your dreams and visions!

Re: Choices (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 05:05:47 AM AEST
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well done, good job.

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