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Array ( [sid] => 110976 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => back on track [time] => 2005-12-05 17:49:24 [hometext] => i just need to to find the true me [bodytext] => walking home feeling alone with the hand of frost grabbing hold
seeing the light of a fire so bright as the bones in my body grows cold

tear in my eyes winds so wild i cant cry as the city streets become my home
night after night i make this treak threw this white my head laying where ever i roam

filling with fear of a end coming near my world comes crashing down
faded with frost i understand that i am lost trying to shovel frozen ground

empty inside with the pain i try to hide but it gets brought up every day
way on the day that my past fades away my soul will find peace to lay

down on the ground my flesh wearing down as knees i walk in this hell
put on the way i stumble every way trying to hold but i fell

deaths grim face a pleasure i could taste but my soul wont let me go
but as i face this rats bloody race i got lost in the pace and burried in the snow

i see you there with your heart that i care but your coldness pushes me away
fight to keep right the smile thats so right but seeing hope fade on you today

you trapped under ice which you think its so nice closing all feeling you display
but fire in your spirit you hardley can see it you wish the world would go astray

but i love you this is so true and my love wont fade to black
i just need to to find the true me and to get my life back on track





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back on track

Contributed by lostrelic on Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 05:49:24 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



walking home feeling alone with the hand of frost grabbing hold
seeing the light of a fire so bright as the bones in my body grows cold

tear in my eyes winds so wild i cant cry as the city streets become my home
night after night i make this treak threw this white my head laying where ever i roam

filling with fear of a end coming near my world comes crashing down
faded with frost i understand that i am lost trying to shovel frozen ground

empty inside with the pain i try to hide but it gets brought up every day
way on the day that my past fades away my soul will find peace to lay

down on the ground my flesh wearing down as knees i walk in this hell
put on the way i stumble every way trying to hold but i fell

deaths grim face a pleasure i could taste but my soul wont let me go
but as i face this rats bloody race i got lost in the pace and burried in the snow

i see you there with your heart that i care but your coldness pushes me away
fight to keep right the smile thats so right but seeing hope fade on you today

you trapped under ice which you think its so nice closing all feeling you display
but fire in your spirit you hardley can see it you wish the world would go astray

but i love you this is so true and my love wont fade to black
i just need to to find the true me and to get my life back on track









Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2005-12-05 17:49:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: back on track (User Rating: 1 )
by Ari on Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 06:14:41 PM AEST
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very nice write...the ending really hit home, i feel like we all have something like that going through our heads

thank you for a good write

peace, love, happiness always
Ari




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