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Array ( [sid] => 110961 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bird of Prey [time] => 2005-12-05 16:03:42 [hometext] => I was just sitting in class and it came to me. My 1st time at this type tell me what you think please. [bodytext] => As you light another cigarette
Take a puff and watch the smoke
Wisp in the light wind
You see an Image
The Bird of Prey
With claws stretch out
Stained red with the blood of many
Ready to kill once again.
Its eyes of white Staring
Into the black nothingness
Its beak razor sharp and hooked
Ready for anything
With its leathery wings
Of black and purple
So finely shaped
They could cut though flesh
Waiting for it prey
For the perfect moment
When it can swoop down
And…
WAIT!! It has found its prey
It beats its wing to
The tick tock of the clock
In one quick moment it will be over
Then a flash of red in the eyes
the wings rip trough it
but it doesn’t seem to harmed
You look down and there it is
The slash of the wing
From the shoulder down
The warm blood slides down
As the bird of prey gets
Wisped away by the wind
The horrifying magnificent
Bird of Prey
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Bird of Prey

Contributed by dalamar on Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 04:03:42 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal



As you light another cigarette
Take a puff and watch the smoke
Wisp in the light wind
You see an Image
The Bird of Prey
With claws stretch out
Stained red with the blood of many
Ready to kill once again.
Its eyes of white Staring
Into the black nothingness
Its beak razor sharp and hooked
Ready for anything
With its leathery wings
Of black and purple
So finely shaped
They could cut though flesh
Waiting for it prey
For the perfect moment
When it can swoop down
And…
WAIT!! It has found its prey
It beats its wing to
The tick tock of the clock
In one quick moment it will be over
Then a flash of red in the eyes
the wings rip trough it
but it doesn’t seem to harmed
You look down and there it is
The slash of the wing
From the shoulder down
The warm blood slides down
As the bird of prey gets
Wisped away by the wind
The horrifying magnificent
Bird of Prey




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Re: Bird of Prey (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 10:56:52 PM AEST
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Smoking will kill ya, you know...

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