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Array ( [sid] => 110928 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Invisibility [time] => 2005-12-04 22:18:38 [hometext] => It's just a poem dedicated to my crush, who hasn't noticed me yet, please comment so i can improve [bodytext] => When he walked by
My mind went black
I can never talk to him
It's confidence I lack

This cruel world
Where nothing's fair
Whatever I do
He'd never care

He gives me colour
Though he doesn't know
When he's not around
My time goes slow

The strong feelings inside me
If only he knew
There might be a chance that
My spirit will renew

"Tell him how you feel"?
That's mission impossible
'Cause he looked right through me
As if I was invisible [comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 2 [informant] => BlitzkriegAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Invisibility

Contributed by BlitzkriegAngel on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 10:18:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When he walked by
My mind went black
I can never talk to him
It's confidence I lack

This cruel world
Where nothing's fair
Whatever I do
He'd never care

He gives me colour
Though he doesn't know
When he's not around
My time goes slow

The strong feelings inside me
If only he knew
There might be a chance that
My spirit will renew

"Tell him how you feel"?
That's mission impossible
'Cause he looked right through me
As if I was invisible

Copyright © BlitzkriegAngel ... [ 2005-12-04 22:18:38]
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Re: Invisibility (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 11:18:49 PM AEST
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A big warm welcome to YPDC. I hope u enjoy it here.
This was an excellent first poem you've presented us with. I hope your crush notices you real soon. A very well written piece of poetry detailed well. Well done and keep penning.
*hugs*
~sue~

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