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Array ( [sid] => 110922 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreams, Screams, and Heartbeats [time] => 2005-12-04 20:29:28 [hometext] => This is a poem that I wrote around two months ago. I woke up in the middle of the night, and had many thoughts in my mind, so I did my best to remember them so I could write this in the morning. Comments are very appreciated. [bodytext] => A story of two lovers,
Who sought to find each other,
Through sorrow and pain, fear and misery,
The story continues for us incessantly.

Brought so much meaning into my life,
So easily enticed,
Your personality and innocence persuaded my mind,
While your love made worthwhile of my time.

Though you were a part of me, I wasn't a part of you yet.
I brought it upon myself that eventually my turn would come,
A time when I would be loved,
So I tried my best; and with hope, put my time and effort just for you to notice me.

Little did I know that you would, but you did.
My time had come and what a time of pride it was,
To be loved by the one that I loved,
I could only wish for nothing else.

I felt you reside deep inside me,
A part of myself that I didn't even discover,
Your words made it so clear,
My life seemed rid of all the clutter.

Sadly I am awoken of this dream,
A deal that I had agreed to,
To give you my heart for your love,
You inscribed your name on it, but pressed too hard,
Now this tender flesh has cuts around your name.

All the time and effort seems wasted now,
I'd give you anything; if I had something left,
You threw away all I had given you,
And it struck my heart,
Thousands of needles penetrating slowly; only to cause more pain.

Walking through an alley of tangled words those nights,
I held your hand and felt your deceptive grip,
Gazing gracefully into your eyes to see mine reflect,
Somewhere between the blue and white I expected to see myself,
But I couldn't find my eyes, perhaps you weren't looking into mine.

What a long night this has turned into,
I can feel the brittleness of my bone and sinew,
Slowly I ponder what exactly went wrong,
Although I try hard, your words seem to clog my thoughts,
Now I know that tears from a heart that's shallow, holds no value.

So dim now, my life has become.
Hopefully you'll shed some light for me so I don't feel stung,
I wish you knew how I felt, but I don't want to cause you any pain.
I'll get back into shape over time, because I have faith in us.

Maybe I wasn't made for love,
But I can feel you inside of me, and I know, that this has to be true love,
For all the pain you cause me, it just floats away through your charm,
I can't live without you by my side,
So let's be together, and let our souls sync,
I am washed clean by your tide,
Hope tells me that tomorrow, I'll see the sun rise.

By: Xbxg32000
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Dreams, Screams, and Heartbeats

Contributed by Xbxg32000 on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 08:29:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



A story of two lovers,
Who sought to find each other,
Through sorrow and pain, fear and misery,
The story continues for us incessantly.

Brought so much meaning into my life,
So easily enticed,
Your personality and innocence persuaded my mind,
While your love made worthwhile of my time.

Though you were a part of me, I wasn't a part of you yet.
I brought it upon myself that eventually my turn would come,
A time when I would be loved,
So I tried my best; and with hope, put my time and effort just for you to notice me.

Little did I know that you would, but you did.
My time had come and what a time of pride it was,
To be loved by the one that I loved,
I could only wish for nothing else.

I felt you reside deep inside me,
A part of myself that I didn't even discover,
Your words made it so clear,
My life seemed rid of all the clutter.

Sadly I am awoken of this dream,
A deal that I had agreed to,
To give you my heart for your love,
You inscribed your name on it, but pressed too hard,
Now this tender flesh has cuts around your name.

All the time and effort seems wasted now,
I'd give you anything; if I had something left,
You threw away all I had given you,
And it struck my heart,
Thousands of needles penetrating slowly; only to cause more pain.

Walking through an alley of tangled words those nights,
I held your hand and felt your deceptive grip,
Gazing gracefully into your eyes to see mine reflect,
Somewhere between the blue and white I expected to see myself,
But I couldn't find my eyes, perhaps you weren't looking into mine.

What a long night this has turned into,
I can feel the brittleness of my bone and sinew,
Slowly I ponder what exactly went wrong,
Although I try hard, your words seem to clog my thoughts,
Now I know that tears from a heart that's shallow, holds no value.

So dim now, my life has become.
Hopefully you'll shed some light for me so I don't feel stung,
I wish you knew how I felt, but I don't want to cause you any pain.
I'll get back into shape over time, because I have faith in us.

Maybe I wasn't made for love,
But I can feel you inside of me, and I know, that this has to be true love,
For all the pain you cause me, it just floats away through your charm,
I can't live without you by my side,
So let's be together, and let our souls sync,
I am washed clean by your tide,
Hope tells me that tomorrow, I'll see the sun rise.

By: Xbxg32000
xbxg32000.deviantart.com
xbxg32000.cjb.net




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Re: Dreams, Screams, and Heartbeats (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 09:15:45 PM AEST
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not bad!!




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