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[Some] Inner aspect of insanity Cries out from somewhere inside me Outside influence abounds Around the outer edges, found Into darkness, out of light Influx of external night Outages of infra-red Distorting visions in my head Interesting outward views Outshining colored solar hues Insight changes outward glance Outstanding interactive dance The yin of in and yang of out Combine within and dance to doubt

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In And Out

Contributed by Nazmythian on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 08:23:20 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

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[Some] Inner aspect of insanity Cries out from somewhere inside me Outside influence abounds Around the outer edges, found Into darkness, out of light Influx of external night Outages of infra-red Distorting visions in my head Interesting outward views Outshining colored solar hues Insight changes outward glance Outstanding interactive dance The yin of in and yang of out Combine within and dance to doubt

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Copyright © Nazmythian ... [ 2005-12-04 20:23:20]
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Re: In And Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 07:22:47 AM AEST
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You play with words
As wizards do
You make me "think"
And doubt what's true
Amazed am I
With every line
And make me wish
That they were mine

Profound and intriguing write, Scotty. Thought provoking seems
an understatement at this point. Your diversity is exceeded only
by your talent, my friend.

~Breeze
*is SO jealous*

Re: In And Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 03:09:37 PM AEST
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Naz,

Ideas come into our head seemingly disconnected until we write them down; and then a cohesive thought formulates in our mind. The thought may drift in and out, until light is shed and finally an insight is gained. This insight may, or may not change our perception.

This is how it impacted me

Good job Nazzy/Scott

Will/Terry

Re: In And Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 04:23:49 PM AEST
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Ahh, well done, this! I like the brevity, and the clout of the words you've chosen. My favorite kind of poetry, really. Spartan over flowery every time.

Keep it up, Nor'westerner. *grins*

Andrew

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